Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

Golden Qualities

I climb a rainbow in my mind
Where colors spread so true
Happiness arrives as I find
Golden qualities in you

Shining across the sky
Shining upon everything below
I don’t have to ask why
I followed this rainbow

I learn new special things
With every color I see
Shared by a pair of wings
Flying, effortlessly

Through a fountain of misty rain
It is refreshing to see and feel
The colors, rain and sun
Blended together, so surreal

Heidi Sands

10/6/17

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Pete Yuhas October 11, 2017 at 9:56 AM Great Rainbow poetry, well done on a colorful subject. Blessings Heidi Sands October 11, 2017 at 9:59 AM Thank you Pete! :)

Russell Sivey October 7, 2017 at 6:52 AM Your rhyming is very exquisitely done within this write my friend! You have done a masterful job with this incredible poem! My favorite lines are in the third stanza, "shared by a pair of wings/ Flying, effortlessly!"What a marvelous stanza that one really is! Great Work Heidi!! Heidi Sands October 7, 2017 at 9:30 AM Thank you so much Russell :)

Vijay Pandit October 6, 2017 at 7:20 PM A lovely scenic depiction--climbing a rainbow and flying effortlessly--loved those lines! Heidi Sands October 7, 2017 at 9:30 AM Thank you so much Vijay :) Have a nice day!

Joseph May October 6, 2017 at 6:24 PM What a beautiful write..enjoyed ...and a fave Heidi Sands October 6, 2017 at 6:30 PM Thank you. I am happy you enjoyed this Joseph and appreciate you consider it a favorite :)