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Golden Qualities

I climb a rainbow in my mind Where colors spread so true Happiness arrives as I find Golden qualities in you Shining across the sky Shining upon everything below I don’t have to ask why I followed this rainbow I learn new special things With every color I see Shared by a pair of wings Flying, effortlessly Through a fountain of misty rain It is refreshing to see and feel The colors, rain and sun Blended together, so surreal Heidi Sands 10/6/17

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Pete Yuhas

Date: 10/11/2017 9:56:00 AM

Great Rainbow poetry, well done on a colorful subject. Blessings

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/11/2017 9:59:00 AM

Thank you Pete! :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/7/2017 6:52:00 AM

Your rhyming is very exquisitely done within this write my friend! You have done a masterful job with this incredible poem! My favorite lines are in the third stanza, "shared by a pair of wings/ Flying, effortlessly!"What a marvelous stanza that one really is! Great Work Heidi!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/7/2017 9:30:00 AM

Thank you so much Russell :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/6/2017 7:20:00 PM

A lovely scenic depiction--climbing a rainbow and flying effortlessly--loved those lines!

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/7/2017 9:30:00 AM

Thank you so much Vijay :) Have a nice day!

Joseph May

Date: 10/6/2017 6:24:00 PM

What a beautiful write..enjoyed ...and a fave

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/6/2017 6:30:00 PM

Thank you. I am happy you enjoyed this Joseph and appreciate you consider it a favorite :)