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Golden Moment

Years have passed since we have known the silence of our nest the tears have come and gone my friend for times we loved the best our hands grow old, and bones are weary from a lifetimes worth of tests but it is still your company I cherish above the rest and as the sun sets on our golden years I feel I must confess, I’ve known more joy and laughter my life’s been truly blessed For once upon a time I found a friend, and who’d have guessed that in one golden moment we’d seal a lifetime with a kiss.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/14/2008 12:38:00 PM
Ooh, I love this! The repretetive rhyme scheme and the change at the end added emphasis and drama, making for a great effect. The flow was natural and smooth. Very well done! Michael
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Date: 10/3/2008 5:32:00 PM
You are truly blessed to share something so special. Love that endures is a precious treasure. Enjoy every moment. This melts my heart. Love, Shar
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Date: 10/3/2008 4:30:00 PM
Trudy this is just wonderful I love this poem - god Bless
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