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Golden Lakes

Gilded waves of sand, Sand-mist blowing with the wind; Dunes of grainy swells.

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James Fraser

Date: 5/2/2009 5:15:00 PM

Reminds me off holidays when i was young on Nairns dunes, quite quaint and gritty. James

Tyler Martin

Date: 5/1/2009 6:06:00 PM

Deserts are lakes of gold, nice observation.

L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/1/2009 6:38:00 AM

Raul, I am happy to be back and to read you again. Great write.

Charlene Bird

Date: 4/30/2009 9:46:00 AM

It's as if I am there while reading this piece of elegance. I can picture it all so clearly, love the dunes of grainy swells!

Brian Strand

Date: 4/30/2009 7:47:00 AM

Love the image in L2 Raul.Rgds Brian

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 4/30/2009 2:51:00 AM

Oh, how i miss the beach! beautiful Raul, love, Kristin

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/29/2009 10:17:00 PM

golden lakes of sand-you made my mind run through the sahara desert with these waves of sand,wonderful as always----------------charma

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/29/2009 6:31:00 PM

You are such a gifted writer of the Haiku, Raul. Each one puts a lovely painting in my mind! I can see these dunes, their sandy swells, so well defined by your words!

James Marshall Goff

Date: 4/29/2009 6:01:00 PM

Raul I particularly like the fluid-motion of the poem! waves...blowing....swells....cool effect! Jim

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/29/2009 3:58:00 PM

Very vivid image, Raul! When people sy go to "that special place" in your mind where you feel comfort and peace, it is a beautiful sand dune in Ormond Beach, FL. You capture the "sand mist" so well! Love this haiku!