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Golden Hour Breathless Embrace

Written: May 25, 2025, for Contest: Sponsored by: Constance La France Quote: "There is a place where voices sing your beauty, A place where every breath carves your image in my soul. Words are a pretext. It is the inner bond that draws" By Rumi *********************** Night's silky scarf adorns a lunar necklace sign, Wanting her a ruby silk veil in a tuxedo design? Translucent limbs disseminate flowers sublime. I fondle her soft skin at the golden hour's time. Swept by every idle breeze, as if there to soar, Borrowing an unending sigh of time, dark core. A revered but wild kiss, a glazed ember sways, We will unite and break, dulcet love, swift ways. Slightly higher down the breathless, winding path Continue to inhale despite the windy day's wrath. An aromatic ambrosia moistens deep, secret caves, As I unzip my soul and bones below dark waves. To quietly remember her fading, love-struck gaze, Pouring dew on a beguiling night's enchanted maze.

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Date: 6/1/2025 7:43:00 AM
A beautiful night journey ~ breathtaking!
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Date: 5/29/2025 9:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Golden Hour Breathless Embrace" write. Great Ending... Have a blessed day with your win.......
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Date: 5/27/2025 2:29:00 PM
This is so romantic- and tender- passionate. I loved reading this.
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Date: 5/27/2025 4:28:00 AM
- Congratulations with your win, Las ... as always you impress with your metaphors :) - hugs
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Date: 5/26/2025 10:47:00 AM
Stunning—like stepping into a dream. Your imagery delicate, carrying sensations of longing, desire, and fleeting beauty. The way you intertwine nature with emotion creates a mesmerizing dance between softness and intensity.
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Date: 5/26/2025 3:10:00 AM
Hey Sotto - your sonnet flows and rhymes so well and is rich with sensual and dreamlike imagery, creating a tapestry of romantic and mystical emotion. The metaphor of “Night’s silky scarf” and a “lunar necklace” immediately sets a luxurious, almost celestial tone, blending intimacy with natural beauty. The use of personification and tactile language—like “fondle her soft skin” and “unzip my soul and bones”—evokes deep vulnerability and desire.
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