Shrineetee Kar Poet Tanka

Golden Eagle

Golden Eagle flies
Up above the misty clouds
On tree, in the nest
The fledgling, fearing young one
Cannot break the misty shroud

The Bird keeps calling
Young one tries harder again
Has to know swooping
For itself to sustain and
Pride of the clan to retain

Thus flows the nature
The strong gets even stronger
The weak stays weaker
But there is a ray of hope
Learners are able to cope.

15.10.2015

For the contest 'Golden Eagle' 
by Shadow Hamilton

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Sara Kendrick October 23, 2015 at 2:53 PM Congrats on your eagle landing on the winners’ page..Way to go!!! Aren’t those eagles a vision of beauty..Sara Shrineetee Kar October 25, 2015 at 10:09 PM Thanks Sara for visiting this one and sending these wishes my way. Regards, Shrineetee.

Balveen Cheema October 23, 2015 at 9:27 AM Well done Shrinetee! Soar higher! Love, Balveen Shrineetee Kar October 25, 2015 at 10:08 PM Thanks Balveen. Appreciate it. Regards. Shrineetee.

Jan Allison October 23, 2015 at 7:20 AM Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx Shrineetee Kar October 25, 2015 at 10:07 PM That's great. Your wishes worked. Thanks a ton. Regards. Shrineetee.

Jan Allison October 15, 2015 at 9:36 AM Beautifully penned Shrineetee good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Shrineetee Kar October 15, 2015 at 11:53 PM Thanks Jan. Appreciated. Regards, Shrineetee.