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Golden Days Past

I still recall your voices And my tears just come Recalling spring garden days But you left me all alone I still recall your faces I am planting flowers weeping Recalling summer shady days When you left me all alone Forever is not of this world Forever is just a lie I still recall your voices But you left me all alone Do you see my tears beloved Because you left me all alone I still recall raking the autumn leaves Now you are the stars that shine above Now you are in the soft wind that caresses I still recall your faces And my tears just come I still recall winter family days And I am full of love You left me alone mom You left me alone dad do you see my tears ______________________________ August 1, 2015 Poetry/Lyric/Golden Days Past Copyright Protected, ID 15-696-558-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym Inspired by the song - Sukiyaki Written for the contest, Sukiyaki, sponsor, Craig Cornish Fifth Place

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Date: 8/26/2015 10:10:00 AM
So heart wrenching, especially beautiful and sad, knowing this was written for your parents. Beautiful piece, Broken Wings....wonderful !!
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Date: 8/26/2015 2:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win a 7 wonderful tribute to your parents. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/25/2015 10:34:00 PM
Congrats on ur superb win broken with this awesome heartfelt write!
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Date: 8/25/2015 1:14:00 PM
Congratulations in james rogers contest.... SKAT
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Date: 8/1/2015 6:42:00 PM
Lol!!!!! Your poem is very beautiful, this shows how you love your beautiful mum and your dad, and how miss them..excellent.........7........A.M.
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