Golden Crowns

When words fail to express 
or vocally tell you 
how a person feels held
deeply inside the knotts 

Those softly mesmerising eyes 
dawning in the afterlife
sweetly startling your music 
begins to play upon lips 

Angel silently calling 
enchanting whispers echo
as the heartbeats thump life 
hypnotic breathless sighs 

As a pulse races quicksand 
under the surface unveils 
you will find me holding 
forever at night love 

Daybreaks warmly comforting 
my precious dream awakens 
I melt into the clouds 
were it smiles with a rays 
  
Light transmitting signals burn
kissing the colours of sunrise 
where my love for you ruby 
can neither be measured or bought

angelbeautifulbeautyblessingdreamquatrain

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Gary Bateman

August 20, 2016 at 4:20 AM

Most Excellent Liam Mate!! The true feeling of romance pulsates throughout this wonderful write. Keepeth Thy Pen Always Golden!! Cheers and Best, Gary (P.S. I just posted the new co-write too, by the way!!)

The Grahamburglar

August 19, 2016 at 8:48 PM

Very smooth. I enjoyed reading this. I like the absence of punctuation here, which is something I don't usually appreciate, but in this case, it really opens it up and allows the reader to put the pauses where they want, and it can change the meaning. The only thing I would like to point out, is that I think you are missing a 'y' in first word of the 5th stanza. I am sure that should be daybreak. Otherwise, excellent. -G

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 19, 2016 at 3:25 PM

- Dear Liam, I enjoy reading this beautiful and romantic poems - The last verse is a jewel - Lovely weekend for you and your loved ones - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

August 19, 2016 at 3:16 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^