golden

 golden sun between
                                dark shadowy trees at dawn....
                                          frosty, iced birdbath

winterhaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

December 27, 2023 at 3:36 PM

Very nice, Sara

Sara Kendrick

December 27, 2023 at 4:35 PM

Thanks, Andrea. Nice of you to drop by. Sara K

Hiya Sharma

December 26, 2023 at 5:49 AM

Wow, what a stunning haiku this is, dear Sara.. I'm absolutely mesmerized by the vividly enchanting imageries that you've created here in such a fascinating way.. Love your artistic wordsmithery that elevates the reader in that mystical dimensions of dark trees and golden sun shining through the canopies.. Just amazing.. So beautifully done.. A FAV for me, truly :) sending you light, always!

Sara Kendrick

December 26, 2023 at 9:32 AM

Thanks, Hiya. I am honored that you faved it. Sara K

Sam Kauffman

December 21, 2023 at 9:49 AM

What a lovely slice of morning in the winter, Sara! I especially like the image of the frozen birdbath! That sets the scene perfectly! Thank you for this lovely haiku! Merry Christmas to you. May this wonderful celebration of God's love be filled with blessings for you and your family!

Sara Kendrick

December 21, 2023 at 10:08 AM

Thank you, Sam, for your wonderful Spirit filled comments. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 21, 2023 at 3:28 AM

- Beautiful written, Sara :) - Merry Christmas to you and your loved ones :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick

December 21, 2023 at 4:11 AM

Anne-Lise, Thanks for the greeting. So far so good here at Christmas. Winter is here starting today. Sara K

Tom Cunningham

December 20, 2023 at 8:12 PM

Love the imagery Sara, nice now that I'm retired, I can watch those wintery scenes through the window.lol. Tom

Sara Kendrick

December 21, 2023 at 2:00 AM

Yes, it is good to be able to stay inside and enjoy a window view. Thanks for the visit. Sara K..My husband has to go out in the weather if at all possible.