Gold - Poof It Is Gone

The morning bright sunlight in the sky,
gold rays reach far and wide.
After a mighty storm,
leaves make a gold carpet to walk upon.
Pretty flowers are opening up,
gold is exploding over the hills and fields.
Nature's gold will not last,
watch it when you can~poof it is gone.
Date Written: 2/20/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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M  Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 2:02 AM
I really enjoyed this Paula….love the line “leaves make a gold carpet to walk upon” Lovely Debx
Goldsmith Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 2:32 PM
Thank You for writing. Glad you enjoyed my "Gold" write. Nature makes the prettiest gold carpet. Have a great day writing away............................
Wolf Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 7:56 PM
Nature's gold lasts longer than mine ever did. lol. Here's to a copper in our cups.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 2:29 PM
Thank You for writing. I think nature is smarter than people are. Yes, to a copper cup. Have a great day writing away............................
McBride  Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 7:45 PM
Amen, grab ahold of the treasures within which will remain: )
Goldsmith Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 2:27 PM
Thank You for /writing. You are right, one needs to  hold on to the treasures within. That is where the real gold can be found. Have a great day writing away............................
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