Gold Peeks

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gold sun peeks through gray deep cobalt clouds closed space.... groundhog__no shadow

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Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 2/20/2022 1:31:00 AM

This is cute! <3

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/20/2022 4:47:00 AM

Thank you, BJ. Your visit is uplifting. Sara

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/18/2022 1:38:00 PM

Hi Sara, What a well written haiku. I’ve never actually seen a groundhog . Have a nice day and weekend-Alexis

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/19/2022 4:13:00 AM

Only on TV have I seen a groundhog myself, Alexis. I am not even sure if it is a species around my area of the US. Thanks for the well wishes. Sara

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/15/2022 1:47:00 PM

The little critter seems to see his shadow more than not, although today is very nice for a winter day. Enjoyed.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/16/2022 3:03:00 AM

M.L., Yes, yesterday was nice out at least there was sunshine and warmth. It seemed cold when I opened the door, but it has been a lot colder this winter. Spring is almost here. Your comment was encouraging. Sara

Bill Baker

Date: 2/12/2022 11:32:00 PM

Yeah! Spring is coming! Thanks for the cute Haiku, Sara. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/13/2022 3:47:00 AM

Bill, It will come even though it might seem that it will never get here. We have plants trying to bloom but the cold at night keeps hurting them. My husband is trying to get it here by working in the garden stirring up wet earth. Thanks for the visit. Your comments are valuable to me. Sara

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 2/10/2022 2:19:00 PM

Sounds as if your on the cusp of spring Sara, it cannot come soon enough now. Nice to think the sun is peeking through grey clouds..We have some early snow drops out, so pretty….Delice

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/11/2022 3:59:00 AM

Delice, We do have some daffodils blooming but they did not grow very tall, also we have Star Magnolia's blooming which is almost always the first one that is out in the ones that bloom in spring. I feel like there is something else that is blooming with some pollen that bothers me, but I don't know what. We are still having freezing temperatures overnight, but during the day it warms up which is really nice. I hope you enjoy an early spring. Thanks for the visit. Sara

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/8/2022 1:42:00 PM

We wish, "no shadow". I think he should have a blindfold on...it's a longshot, but it might help...hoping...yeah.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/11/2022 3:50:00 AM

M.L., Sorry that your area might experience a longer winter. I think this has been a very hard one for sure. Thank you for your visit. Sara