Gold Hunt

I came to find some gold today
A gold coin so precious
The sun dropped from the sky
I turned around and looked at you
I found the golden coin
Sparkling in your eyes!

8.6.2021
Sponsor: Line Gauthier
Contest: Bite Size Poem no.5
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June 8, 2021 at 5:01 AM
WoW! Carol, You title caught my attention. As I clicked and read, I was not disappointed. The gold found in this verse is the most valued “ gold” of all. All who find it is rich beyond measure. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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June 8, 2021 at 6:02 AM
Thank you dear Alexis....I am glad you liked the poem....much love :)
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