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Gold Fish in a Bowl

" Hello there" I can see you You think I have no privacy but neither do you I have windows on all sides and I watch your every move So don't feel sorry for me I enjoy your company too. T Reams

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 3/11/2015 5:12:00 AM
This is a poem with many elements - one to enjoy reading over and over. Julia, :)
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Date: 3/11/2015 10:03:00 AM
Thank you very much for the comment! I wonder if I could sell this to Petsmart? Just kidding. Thanks again.
Date: 1/20/2015 5:15:00 PM
Cute clever write - love idea of being on the inside looking out - love the imagery in this poem it is so so clever:-) a 7 from me:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/11/2015 10:02:00 AM
Sorry I'm late on the reply! Thank you so much for the comment. It was a challenge from my son-in-law.