Gold Fish In a Bowl

" Hello there" 
I can see you
You think I have no privacy but neither do you
I have windows on all sides and I watch your every move
So don't feel sorry for me 
I enjoy your company too.

T Reams
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Ward Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 5:12 AM
This is a poem with many elements - one to enjoy reading over and over. Julia, :)
Reams Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 10:03 AM
Thank you very much for the comment! I wonder if I could sell this to Petsmart? Just kidding. Thanks again.
Allison Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 5:15 PM
Cute clever write - love idea of being on the inside looking out - love the imagery in this poem it is so so clever:-) a 7 from me:-) Hugs jan xx
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March 11, 2015 at 10:02 AM
Sorry I'm late on the reply! Thank you so much for the comment. It was a challenge from my son-in-law.
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