Gold Fish and the Frog

There was a Goldfish who thought he was a shark.
He kept biting the lily pad of a Monk Frog.
Behave said the frog, for you are no shark.
I can if I want, said the goldfish, if you are a Monk.

The goldfish kept attacking the lily pad with ardor and *****.
He wouldn’t be gainsaid on being a shark.
As the Frog studied relentlessly to become what was wont.
Neither one believing the other… could become what he did want.

Now along came a snake to eat the monk frog on his ark.
But to him… this lily pad was sacred, and he didn’t want to disembark.
So the goldfish attached a leaf to stand straight up on his back…
And as he bit the snake’s tail the frog hollered SHARK!
 
Pandemonium ensued as the frightened snake did run off…
Thinking it’s better to be safe, than as some one else’s dinner doffed.
So some how, together they both became what they did want.
Living happily ever after, as friends in that great lily pond.

The moral my friend is you can be whatever you want.
Still, don’t stop as the path becomes hard, that you sought…
For if a gold fish can become a shark… and a Frog a Monk…
Then with work and friends made… you can become whatever you want.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 24, 2012 at 6:40 PM
Carol, , congratulations In Debbie, Fairy Tail Contest"' it was an amazing hit ;-) have yourself a good one~PD
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May 24, 2012 at 10:06 AM
Love a story or story poem with a moral. This is delightful and would make a wonderful children's book !!! Love it !! All because of a sacred lilly pad...delightful !! Congrats on a well deserved win !!
May Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 9:31 AM
very nice tale Carol...congrats on your win..always..Joseph
Brown Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 6:51 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Carol E. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 2:25 AM
Carol congrats on your win..David
Guzzi Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 1:15 PM
I did so like this story poem! Carol..to be personification the animals have to become people..turning the Frog INTO a Monk. Give the Frog dialogue then he speaks and a man does speak and not a frog. The goldfish is still a fish even if he changes to a shark. List form as Verse. Light & Love
Guzzi Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 1:19 PM
"Behave," said the Frog, "for you are no shark!" The Frog hollered "shark!" [somehow..is one word.]
Merryman Avatar
January 29, 2012 at 3:04 PM
Cute story. Congrats to the both of you for your win. Love, Kim
Pettit Avatar
January 29, 2012 at 12:35 AM
Congratulations on winning with this fine entry. All of you made a great team when this was written.
Bombardieri Avatar
January 28, 2012 at 7:29 PM
Congrats Carol!! Great write!
Sweetheart Avatar
January 28, 2012 at 8:58 AM
congrats Carol on a terrific third place win for this dynamic delight luv..
Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2012 at 7:53 PM
CArol, how FUN to see a wife and hubbie team!! You made a really cute story, loved the leaf making him look like a shark. Congratulations.
Arno Avatar
January 27, 2012 at 6:14 PM
Congratulations on your amazing write. Good job. Best regards, Jon
Williams Avatar
January 27, 2012 at 8:30 AM
Carol and fellow collabs, congrats on your win, loved it..David
Brown Avatar
January 27, 2012 at 7:03 AM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Double Contest" Carol. Love, Carol
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January 27, 2012 at 6:06 AM
Cogratulations to you both!! Great message! Blessings, Rhonda
A   Avatar
January 27, 2012 at 12:58 AM
CAROL, CONGRATULATIONS with your wonderful win in my contest* hugs ;-)~p.d
Bagnall Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 5:43 AM
Nice story, enjoyed, some of the sentence structure seemed a little confused to me.
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December 30, 2011 at 9:10 PM
WoW! loved the story n the moral within. Cleverly done Carol, good luck on the contest and thank you for your visit & kind comment. Have a great night in the new year!
Ball Avatar
December 30, 2011 at 11:44 AM
Cute as a button and with a great moral. Aesop would be proud of you. God Bless, JB
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December 30, 2011 at 11:23 AM
Smile.............yes,you can be whatever you want! Thank you for reeding my poem,Carol. HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU.hugs from Anne-Lise
Squyres Avatar
December 30, 2011 at 11:11 AM
Enjoyed this story...and the message. Well done !!
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