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gold digger

killing for love? we should out grow it unless it's for deceivers and you know it those less fortunate charity recievers those pretty eye's and nails masscara that never fails those that are witty for a reason allways dressed up for the season when you speak their eye's are wide open tabulating the latest slogan until something better comes along then swoops the shadow of lonliness what happened to that pressence what happened to that smile why so suddenly anothers child a shared togetherness for a short while feeling so used like a rung on a ladder the dirt from your shoes on my face my pursuit of you a public disgrace and when i finally see, like the prodicals son my first thought about a gun who? what for the reader may ask the world cannot keep the both of us

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/9/2012 12:40:00 PM
So strong poem and very true,unfortunately,I love it,thank you dear John,Ivy
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Date: 1/17/2012 12:06:00 PM
I am afraid I don't like anything with the word gun in it. Yes, we have gold diggers in this world and we have users in this world but in the end God does judge. love phyl
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Date: 12/3/2011 2:58:00 PM
you thought about a gun? the word 'gun' is synonymous with violence in my mind and I'm afraid the word police cannot condone it under any circumstances...
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John Loving III
Date: 12/3/2011 5:33:00 PM
violence is loves answer to jealosy and deceit. it's a principal.
Date: 12/2/2011 7:17:00 AM
Amazing John, such deep content and great rhyme. You sure got a special poem going here and I need to have it as a fav. P S I see you were around last night looking at some of my older ones - thanks for the visit and sweet comments.
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