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Gold Bankrolled Tb

Tree's gold now glows
It lies cold on 
The lawn, grows mold  

Contest:Bauk-Than Than-Bauk
Sponsor:Charles Messina
Date: December 07, 2020

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Reason A. Poteet

February 20, 2021 at 10:18 AM

Brilliant switcheroo, Sara, from gold to mold. Congrats!

Sara Kendrick

February 20, 2021 at 1:42 PM

Thanks, Reason. I appreciate you dropping by with congrats and taking time to read it as well. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

February 17, 2021 at 5:09 AM

Picturesque imagery! Congratulations!

Sara Kendrick

February 17, 2021 at 7:09 AM

Kim, Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Sara

Charles Messina

February 15, 2021 at 9:28 PM

Lovely, Sara. Congrats on your win!

Sara Kendrick

February 16, 2021 at 2:19 AM

Charles, Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Sara

Jack Horne

December 10, 2020 at 12:40 PM

lovely than bauk - I like this form

Sara Kendrick

December 10, 2020 at 3:01 PM

Jack, Thanks..It is short unless one cares to take it on for a few stanzas. If a person can say what is needed in a few short words then it is a good form for them. Sara

Gershon Wolf

December 9, 2020 at 7:15 PM

Superbly penned, Sara! Hard-to-do too, and your 'BT' reads seamlessly and meaningfully. G.L. in the contest, Gershon

Sara Kendrick

December 10, 2020 at 4:54 AM

Gershon, Thanks for the kind review. I did have a hard time writing this one for some reason. I think I was not thinking clearly. Sara

Mystic Rose Rose

December 9, 2020 at 6:32 PM

They do look splendid when they are all revved in gold, but it also tells us they'll be closing up for the season soon, thank you for sharing your delightful verse today, and grateful for your kind visit too.

Sara Kendrick

December 10, 2020 at 4:53 AM

MRR, Yes, we know that ole man winter is around the corner. Here in the south we never know if it will be mild or be a really bad one. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Jennifer Fenn

December 9, 2020 at 6:11 PM

Wow! You used this form well to show how fleeting life amid gold leaves can be! The picture is gorgeous!

Sara Kendrick

December 10, 2020 at 4:44 AM

Jennifer, Thanks for dropping by. The leaves only get one summer then they help build up the earth. Even in death they have a purpose. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

John Watt

December 9, 2020 at 3:12 PM

Nicely done, Sara, and a beautiful picture to go with it. For the contest I think he said 2 words only in the title. Enjoy your day ~ John

Sara Kendrick

December 10, 2020 at 4:40 AM

John, Thanks for the information. I like that picture also. I only have one tree and I think maybe have had two beautiful seasons of color in about 20 years. The weather doesn't seem to agree with the tree. Sara..Thanks for the visit.