Gold

golden grass lies dust
below the dry dead  mountain’s
rocky  quartz outcrops
that yield such a golden grain
as shame man's cultured pastures.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Onclaud Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 2:47 PM
a tanka that delights with your colorful art-words!...:) huggs
Kendrick Avatar
May 22, 2013 at 5:07 PM
Very descriptive and creative work that you have penned in this one..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for your visit to my work with congrats..Sara
Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 2:25 AM
- A intresant poem to read, well done Red! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 10:43 PM
This is a very interesting one, Red. Soupmail
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