Harry Horsman Poet Rhyme

Gold

If my horse on the race course
a winner for me
then the course for my race horse
makes me debt free.

So the beat of the mare's feet
makes me debt free
gold such a treat for this feat
a winner for me.

© Harry J Horsman  2012

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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl May 11, 2012 at 10:11 AM What a smashing twisting write harry, love it and thank you for all your support and great comments I appreciate them immensly.

Black Eyed Susan May 8, 2012 at 11:16 AM good one - let me know which horse you're betting on next time! I could sure use some 'gold' ;)

Wilma Neels May 8, 2012 at 5:15 AM Harry this could also end up being a twister hey.. Quite enjoyed this.. Think Andy will too :) all the best for her contest, love Wilma

Deborah Burch May 7, 2012 at 1:21 PM Fabulous word play!!! I love it Harry! Well done and good luck in the contest! big hugs, love deb

Laura Breidenthal May 7, 2012 at 1:15 PM Awesome verse! Very entertaining to read and very witty. Always, Laura

Elizabeth Wesley May 7, 2012 at 11:52 AM A tongue twister with brilliance! Great way to weave a rhyme Harry, it really is special and I shall keep it in my faves. Lizzie

Kash Poet May 7, 2012 at 8:20 AM A brilliant poem by you Harry!A sure winner here.Enjoyed the read.