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If my horse on the race course a winner for me then the course for my race horse makes me debt free. So the beat of the mare's feet makes me debt free gold such a treat for this feat a winner for me. © Harry J Horsman 2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/11/2012 10:11:00 AM
What a smashing twisting write harry, love it and thank you for all your support and great comments I appreciate them immensly.
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Date: 5/8/2012 11:16:00 AM
good one - let me know which horse you're betting on next time! I could sure use some 'gold' ;)
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Date: 5/8/2012 5:15:00 AM
Harry this could also end up being a twister hey.. Quite enjoyed this.. Think Andy will too :) all the best for her contest, love Wilma
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Date: 5/7/2012 1:21:00 PM
Fabulous word play!!! I love it Harry! Well done and good luck in the contest! big hugs, love deb
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Date: 5/7/2012 1:15:00 PM
Awesome verse! Very entertaining to read and very witty. Always, Laura
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Date: 5/7/2012 11:52:00 AM
A tongue twister with brilliance! Great way to weave a rhyme Harry, it really is special and I shall keep it in my faves. Lizzie
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Date: 5/7/2012 8:20:00 AM
A brilliant poem by you Harry!A sure winner here.Enjoyed the read.
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