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When you see me Covered and bare With septic soot - Sores that began With Satan’s hoofs. The ones that trounced Upon our graves With subtle lies, Agenda craze. Bring all your poor Through open doors. Let’s not keep score. We adore them… We hid our scales And common sense. We filled our streets With tents and tense. Fires on wood streets, Kids with needles Between their toes. But aren’t we nice? We hand them phones. You’re not alone… A lullaby - We rock their bones, We sell their souls Along with ours. We teach them sooths With candy staffs. Nevermind rules Their cruel…object. Don’t mind hammer Overhead. Don’t Look around you. Keep your eyes fixed Away from sand, Afghanistan, And all good plans. Enjoy the ride While water’s cool Before the boil, The hooven spoil. Watch earth’s recoil When it’s too late. Miss heaven’s gate. Enjoy hell’s hate. 8/16/2021

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Date: 8/23/2021 9:36:00 PM
Very thought provoking, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/24/2021 5:19:00 AM
Thank you, Jennifer!
Date: 8/16/2021 5:25:00 PM
Kim, you've written an excellent poem that is shocking in its honesty! Everyone should read this. It should also be a POTD.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/17/2021 5:08:00 AM
Thank you so much, Lasaad.
Date: 8/16/2021 8:49:00 AM
Sad but true "A lullaby - We rock their bones, We sell their souls Along with ours."
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2021 11:02:00 AM
Thank you. Hugs ~
Date: 8/16/2021 8:21:00 AM
While I may disagree with some of your thoughts, it's the mark of a good poet to stir our thinking! It's an excellent poem - one to read again and again.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2021 11:02:00 AM
I thank you, Ann! There are times I don’t agree with the poet and still can admire their poetry. Blessings for your fairness.
Date: 8/16/2021 8:01:00 AM
A dark poem indeed, Kim but I'm doing my best to wear shoes at least. Hugs from heaven.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2021 11:03:00 AM
Sometimes the thoughts come out. What is happening today in Afghanistan is wretched!
Date: 8/16/2021 7:37:00 AM
This is startling with it's naked truth! Everyone should read this!!!! God bless your pen. Love, Gina
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2021 7:39:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear lady! God bless you always with lots of colorful ink!

Book: Shattered Sighs