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Going Through the Motions

sad people ~ day after day wallowing in misery sad and they don’t understand running and running content in their clouds of misery empty people ~ ignoring what’s down deep inside empty and they don’t understand running and running ignoring the void they feel inside shallow people ~ living a shell for an existence shallow and they don’t understand running and running like robots a superficial existence blind people ~ insensitive to light blind and they don’t understand running and running refusing to see what’s in their own heart dead people ~ mimicking the motions dead and they don’t understand running and running dead~ they've tuned out their emotions AP: 3rd place 2021 Posted on February 5, 2018

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Date: 2/6/2018 5:40:00 PM
this was really cool how you kept repeating the running and running line. All types of these people are running from what they need in their lives. So thoughtful this is!
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Date: 2/6/2018 7:13:00 AM
Fitting descriptions...well said Line!
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Date: 2/6/2018 8:04:00 AM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Vijay.

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