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Going Steady

The heels’ climbing trellis — Crimson roses, bold and beautiful. Wrapped like a winding staircase, The taupe strap shin high. Snazzy red toenails. The fashion’d lady primped, Ready for her handsome “steady.” 4/23/2021

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Date: 4/28/2021 9:59:00 PM
Oh, I see it and I smile, remembering....
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2021 4:36:00 AM
And I smile with you :)
Date: 4/24/2021 9:41:00 PM
Kim, you sure know how to tease and tantalize. Whew. Time for a cold shower. lol. Really great piece. :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/25/2021 2:55:00 PM
LOL! Thanks ;)
Date: 4/24/2021 4:00:00 PM
Oh your a big tease Kim, who could resist such elegance, cheers David
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/24/2021 7:07:00 PM
LOL...thanks :)
Date: 4/24/2021 3:54:00 AM
Delightful metaphor, dearest Kim! Hugs xxx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/24/2021 4:30:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 4/24/2021 2:25:00 AM
Great metaphorical write, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/24/2021 4:30:00 AM
Thank you, Victor! Hugs :)

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