Going Home In Gateshead 1952

GOING  HOME  IN  GATESHEAD  1952


Boy and mother walking home.
Sounds  muffled,  closed  intimate silence.  It was snowing.

Street  lamps’  light of warm orange   blazed a trail 
Of modern life across the sorry, inner city of Gateshead. 
Orange snow covering every horizontal surface. 
No wind,  just silence and orange snow.

Away to the north  the industries of the Tyne
Were metamorphosed. 
The   leviathan gas-holder drum looked like
An enormous christmas cake with beautiful icing 
Layered on its gently curving, shallow-domed top. 

Valleys filled for miles  with  ropeworks, 
Papermills,  steel  plants and power stations  -
All disguised  now in orange snow. 

Coke ovens sending up  mushroom  clouds 
Of white-hot steam every half hour, 
As  twenty-ton loads of red-hot coke were cooled by dowsing. 
Oven doors two miles away over the valley  would open -
The glare of the coke’s  fiery furnace was a peep into  hell itself.

Momentarily,  it  was all gone, in a snow-cloud  from the  Pennines, 
And the steep, shabby streets falling  down to the Tyne 
Seemed to plunge themselves into an orange oblivion, 
As the snowfall enveloped  two tiny figures walking slowly home. 

The boy turned his face up  to catch flakes on his tongue 
And let them fall into his eyes,  lost in an orange make-believe world.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Konos Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 9:18 PM
Never having experienced this lifestyle, thoughout the poetry, I felt there was a small boy walking with a caring Mother, yet both were being held inside a prison camp, if not literally, then emotionally. You have defined the setting and characters to perfection. thank you....
Babcock Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 12:14 PM
Industry seems to play havoc in all countries. So many factories, so much pollution , so many people who labor in these factories. So many lost in that orange make believe world. You have an excellent write Sydney. God Bless Phyl
Guzzi Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 6:22 AM
Hello Mother Russia!!! I have roots in Russia but have never been there. I guess the feeling I got was we were damn lucky to get the heck out (wince) Russian Jews and programs. But I am very curious, I'd love to talk more.(Marvelous recounting of life where you are most excellent write!) Light & Love
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