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Going Hard

Through me untapped insperation lays Only through me greatness will follow I started from the bottom I can only rise With these words you can tell me head is not hollow I will not give in I'm only at the starting stage All I need is a bottle of gin To become great I must break out of my cage I've accomplished so much from the start No time to slow down I promise you I will not fall apart To you I was a clown but now I'm wearing the crown I have you memorized deep in my words no way out Next thing you know I was idolized now you know what I'm about please do lash out so i can get the knockout Going hard is the game yes my name is Steven Dunn putting you to shame I'm the new poet getting it done yes I'm number one having fun The way I came up was like a flame inside of a frame Did you just burn yourself I remember you got spun into a shun by Steven dunn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/3/2015 9:06:00 AM
Interesting and fantastic write on the theme of jealousy, congrats on the win, Steven
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Date: 1/3/2015 2:07:00 AM
Congrats on your fine win Steven... huggs
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Date: 1/2/2015 11:31:00 PM
STEVEN, Congratulations on your win. Awesome "Green-Eyed Monster, poem." Love LINDA
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Date: 1/2/2015 3:17:00 PM
great write steven many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/2/2015 3:01:00 PM
As a winner of my contest, I congratulate you! Verlena
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Date: 2/11/2014 8:11:00 PM
Stevens, awesome win... . Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/9/2014 10:20:00 PM
Congratulations on this fine win, steven
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Date: 1/9/2014 7:40:00 PM
congrats for your poem . Fun how you put yourself into the poem!
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Date: 1/7/2014 3:41:00 PM
Steven, . Congratulations, and thank you for entering my contest. It has been a delight hosting so many contests. If you like you can enjoy the hugs, I left all winning poems on my blog "I WILL BE FAITHFUL." link-------> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=18505&PoetID=18720 <----- Enjoy and stop by if you'd like...... Always & Forever ** LINDA
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Date: 1/7/2014 10:02:00 AM
Steven .. Congratulations:) thank you for supporting my contest...... xOx ~LINDA
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