Nate D. Poet Haiku

Going Haiku Crazy

*Silent grave yard*

Calm,dry,stale air
no one comes to visit here
dead and forgotten
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*Earth Core*

Hungry hearts collide
sweet love under a full moon
earths core is spinning
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*Mix Breed*

Fangs break through your flesh
your blood flows into my veins
vamperic embrace
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*Drive by*
 
Stars sprinkle the sky 
the moon shows its full splendor 
I hate collage kids 
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*Tree Top*

Swaying with the wind
natures greatest rain dancers
dancing for heaven
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*Rain Killers*

Death do to wet air
dry throats gasping for water
thunder cries for them
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*Tender*
 
Baby crying out
let me soothe and comfort it
back into the pot 
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*Gurrr Me*

Venom racing through
body reacts and stiffens
I want to STRIKE you 
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~P.D. Going Haiku Crazy Contest~     coming soon

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Skat A May 26, 2015 at 5:44 PM yup, you went crazy

Poet Destroyer A October 25, 2013 at 1:09 PM sweet sweet hugs...PD

C.C Bloomsfield October 18, 2010 at 4:33 AM i enjoyed the journey to haiku crazy!awesome!

Sara Kendrick October 15, 2010 at 2:53 PM Congratulations on your win in the contest..Interesting thoughts penned for sure..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Sylvia Coulstock October 15, 2010 at 2:09 PM Hi Nathan Clever Haiku.Some of them quite beautiful,especially 'Tree TOP'-wonderful-Congratulations on your well deserved win.Thank you for your comments on my words I was so happy to be able to share them. luv June(Sylvia)

Kabuteng P.Ink K. October 8, 2010 at 3:15 AM coming back here to say congrats, Nathan!! Enjoyed your haiku series very much :) --nikko :)

Andrea Dietrich October 5, 2010 at 8:23 PM some of these were such a hoot, Nathan. Congrats in PD's contest! Surprised she did not put you higher (heehee) LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 5, 2010 at 2:56 PM Congrats Nate on your terrific win in the Haiku contest with these tremendous Haikus so expressive ... enjoyed my friend as u enjoy your win tonight with luv... my BFF ...

Poet Destroyer A October 5, 2010 at 12:42 PM mmm! your blood flows into my veins!! my favorite line! Congrats! I will leave off at ~I want to STRIKE you~ lol,, xoxooxox,,,LOVE,,,p.d.

Francine Roberts October 5, 2010 at 12:39 PM you're kinda warped aren't you, love it, congrats on your win in the contest

Carol Sunshine Brown October 5, 2010 at 12:16 PM Congratulations Nathan on your win in P.D.'s contest *Going Haiku Crazy*. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta October 5, 2010 at 12:15 PM Congratulations on this well deserved win, Nathan

Royal Trevino September 28, 2010 at 10:23 AM Lol;-) now I'm LMFAO;-) Voodoo & chicken =(^.^)=

Phil Boy September 27, 2010 at 1:11 PM lmfao' b.boy

Kabuteng P.Ink K. September 24, 2010 at 5:39 PM very nice-- and how cute is that? you and pd both have gone haiku crazy :) way too cool ;)-- I have to say I really like the tree tops and the gurr me ones lol :) thanks for all your comments :) --nikko :)

Wilma Neels September 24, 2010 at 11:05 AM Nate, I enjoyed your series of Haiku poems, each with its own unique punch line.. thank you for your kind comments today...Hope your weekend will be an awesome one :) Wilma

Phyllis Babcock September 24, 2010 at 8:21 AM I enjoyed the series of Haiku poems . One of my favorite forms and what I first started out on poetry with. I did one a day but never saved any of them and now I wish I did. God Bless Phyl

Doris Culverhouse September 24, 2010 at 7:27 AM captured the essence of the contest! thanks for the comments and have a Tender--Gurrr day

Diane Locksley September 24, 2010 at 5:51 AM Interesting series of haiku, Nathan. I like the first one the best. Thanks for reading my poem. Best to you, Diane

Sara Kendrick September 24, 2010 at 5:40 AM Interesting group of Haiku..Much work went into this one..Sara

Poet Destroyer A September 24, 2010 at 1:19 AM wow! enjoyed your poem, my fav is the gurrr one. I'm also glad all your sourroundings inspired your haiku. lol,, to the pot and babies,,,enjoyed. xoxoxooxoxooxoxo,..later,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich September 23, 2010 at 10:17 PM My favorite was the one about the tree tops. VEry nice and some of these others were funny, like the baby in the pot oh my!! Hmm, a PD haiku contest . Sounds tasty. Loved reading your haiku. Andrea

Francine Roberts September 23, 2010 at 9:48 PM really enjoyed your haikus Nathan (though "Tender" is a little disturbing) Have a good night thanks for the comment

Ravindra K Kapoor September 23, 2010 at 8:29 PM The first one is a brilliant one. I would rather call it an elegy in the memory of those, whom no one remembers now. Great Haiku. Thanks for your comments on my poem Rangoli -A gift for my Poetry Soup friends. Love and best wishes ...Ravindra......Nathan Dilts.

Sidney Hall Mad Poet September 23, 2010 at 8:17 PM Thanks for the comment Nathan. I must say you have a unique way of writing this Ihave to place in me favs