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Going Haiku Crazy

*Silent grave yard* Calm,dry,stale air no one comes to visit here dead and forgotten ________________________ *Earth Core* Hungry hearts collide sweet love under a full moon earths core is spinning ________________________ *Mix Breed* Fangs break through your flesh your blood flows into my veins vamperic embrace ________________________ *Drive by* Stars sprinkle the sky the moon shows its full splendor I hate collage kids ________________________ *Tree Top* Swaying with the wind natures greatest rain dancers dancing for heaven ________________________ *Rain Killers* Death do to wet air dry throats gasping for water thunder cries for them ________________________ *Tender* Baby crying out let me soothe and comfort it back into the pot ________________________ *Gurrr Me* Venom racing through body reacts and stiffens I want to STRIKE you ________________________ ~P.D. Going Haiku Crazy Contest~ coming soon

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Date: 5/26/2015 5:44:00 PM
yup, you went crazy
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Date: 10/25/2013 1:09:00 PM
sweet sweet hugs...PD
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Date: 10/18/2010 4:33:00 AM
i enjoyed the journey to haiku crazy!awesome!
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Date: 10/15/2010 2:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest..Interesting thoughts penned for sure..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 10/15/2010 2:09:00 PM
Hi Nathan Clever Haiku.Some of them quite beautiful,especially 'Tree TOP'-wonderful-Congratulations on your well deserved win.Thank you for your comments on my words I was so happy to be able to share them. luv June(Sylvia)
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Date: 10/8/2010 3:15:00 AM
coming back here to say congrats, Nathan!! Enjoyed your haiku series very much :) --nikko :)
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Date: 10/5/2010 8:23:00 PM
some of these were such a hoot, Nathan. Congrats in PD's contest! Surprised she did not put you higher (heehee) LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/5/2010 2:56:00 PM
Congrats Nate on your terrific win in the Haiku contest with these tremendous Haikus so expressive ... enjoyed my friend as u enjoy your win tonight with luv... my BFF ...
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:42:00 PM
mmm! your blood flows into my veins!! my favorite line! Congrats! I will leave off at ~I want to STRIKE you~ lol,, xoxooxox,,,LOVE,,,p.d.
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:39:00 PM
you're kinda warped aren't you, love it, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:16:00 PM
Congratulations Nathan on your win in P.D.'s contest *Going Haiku Crazy*. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:15:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Nathan
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Date: 9/28/2010 10:23:00 AM
Lol;-) now I'm LMFAO;-) Voodoo & chicken =(^.^)=
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Date: 9/27/2010 1:11:00 PM
lmfao' b.boy
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Date: 9/24/2010 5:39:00 PM
very nice-- and how cute is that? you and pd both have gone haiku crazy :) way too cool ;)-- I have to say I really like the tree tops and the gurr me ones lol :) thanks for all your comments :) --nikko :)
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Date: 9/24/2010 11:05:00 AM
Nate, I enjoyed your series of Haiku poems, each with its own unique punch line.. thank you for your kind comments today...Hope your weekend will be an awesome one :) Wilma
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Date: 9/24/2010 8:21:00 AM
I enjoyed the series of Haiku poems . One of my favorite forms and what I first started out on poetry with. I did one a day but never saved any of them and now I wish I did. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 9/24/2010 7:27:00 AM
captured the essence of the contest! thanks for the comments and have a Tender--Gurrr day
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Date: 9/24/2010 5:51:00 AM
Interesting series of haiku, Nathan. I like the first one the best. Thanks for reading my poem. Best to you, Diane
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Date: 9/24/2010 5:40:00 AM
Interesting group of Haiku..Much work went into this one..Sara
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Date: 9/24/2010 1:19:00 AM
wow! enjoyed your poem, my fav is the gurrr one. I'm also glad all your sourroundings inspired your haiku. lol,, to the pot and babies,,,enjoyed. xoxoxooxoxooxoxo,..later,..p.d.
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Date: 9/23/2010 10:17:00 PM
My favorite was the one about the tree tops. VEry nice and some of these others were funny, like the baby in the pot oh my!! Hmm, a PD haiku contest . Sounds tasty. Loved reading your haiku. Andrea
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Date: 9/23/2010 9:48:00 PM
really enjoyed your haikus Nathan (though "Tender" is a little disturbing) Have a good night thanks for the comment
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Date: 9/23/2010 8:29:00 PM
The first one is a brilliant one. I would rather call it an elegy in the memory of those, whom no one remembers now. Great Haiku. Thanks for your comments on my poem Rangoli -A gift for my Poetry Soup friends. Love and best wishes ...Ravindra......Nathan Dilts.
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Date: 9/23/2010 8:17:00 PM
Thanks for the comment Nathan. I must say you have a unique way of writing this Ihave to place in me favs
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