Goethe's Path

Let me take you on a journey To this beautiful space and time It's well beyond this ferny Where mother nature has assigned To the entrance we now venture Through an avenue of bluebell bloom For my senses are now in adventure I'm in capture at her perfume One can only marvel at her greens Canopies so high in the sky Looking down on her carpeted screen It's a delight to absorb and sigh When I look back from hence I came It was a joy to be in her surround To see it all gone would be such a shame For her vistas should always abound .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 9/22/2014 9:05:00 AM
to where my home, no such near forests.. or woodland.. thanks to pictures that I have idea how they look like.. :) well. I have one like this too , mr James. :D yours is pretty too.. :)
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James Fraser
Date: 9/22/2014 4:42:00 PM
Thank you Olive. Much of Scotland is barren, but the lush areas are simply beautiful, especially with ancient Castles, James :)
Date: 7/18/2014 1:11:00 AM
It's a pretty path you show us. I really envy you living where you do. But I guess you might think Utah was pretty cool too!
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James Fraser
Date: 7/18/2014 3:25:00 PM
There are so many walks and paths amongst her greens. To me, the same but different, but I enjoy all her scenes. To me I just close my eyes, and picture I'm somewhere else, even if it's an desert, I never leave my thoughts on the shelf, James :)
Date: 7/17/2014 3:14:00 PM
Ahh!! Wonderful nature work..Enjoyed reading your unique and descriptive lines..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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James Fraser
Date: 7/17/2014 3:31:00 PM
Thank you Sara, James :)
Date: 7/11/2014 7:55:00 AM
The flow and rhyme really added to the imagery. A truly beautiful poem...
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James Fraser
Date: 7/16/2014 3:57:00 PM
Thank you kindly Carol, your comments always make me smile, James :)
Date: 7/11/2014 12:15:00 AM
Beautifully imagined nature walk, James. I am seeing such great poems in this form!!
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Date: 7/16/2014 3:49:00 PM
It's lovely to imagine the many such walks through beautiful canopies throughout the World. Oh to even witness some of them, James
Date: 7/9/2014 5:00:00 PM
James I was with you all the way, very good...David
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Date: 7/10/2014 4:06:00 PM
Many thanks David, much appreciated, James.....
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