God's Way

I don't think
so I stink,
evil I didn't eschew
it I did chew,
God i took for granted
I became grounded,
had bad attitude
that brought low altitude,
I don't pray
so I was the devil's prey,
I got tired
and decided to be fired,
then I gave God a chance
He made me to dance.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Agustin Avatar
November 28, 2024 at 9:39 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 8, 2016 at 11:43 AM
Victor, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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January 10, 2016 at 3:42 PM
well done, Victor, I enjoyed reading your excellent poem today. Thanks for sharing -SKAT
Mehta Avatar
May 10, 2014 at 7:22 AM
Inspirational write on Faith, Victor
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