God's Wardrobe

in god's dark wardrobe 
like a ghost of a nightgown 
a see-through soul glows
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Lamoureux Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 9:14 AM
I always imagine him in pure white. :0)
Dietrich Avatar
December 19, 2019 at 7:44 PM
it sounds like a transparent soul and I really like that kind!
Wolf Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 7:53 PM
How about a wardrobe upgrade for the Gent Upstairs. May we recommend something a bit lighter, pehaps?... Sam Revere (formerly Sam Severe)
Ravidas Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 10:52 AM
Thank you, Wolf. Wait and see)
Proxenos Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 11:57 AM
WOW - this deserves a stream of comments - great verse Kurt. Christmas Blessings, Jennifer.
Ravidas Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 10:49 AM
Thank you, Jennifer. Rays of love)
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