K River Poet Haiku

God's River

GOD'S River
               
                          Mighty, flows forever,                             
              GOD answers prayers; desired needs,                            
                    GOD'S SON; = FORGIVENESS

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Len Gasun September 8, 2014 at 9:31 AM I extremely love this one. Thank you for sharing my dear friend kr river! Many warm congratulations on your win! Big sweet hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora K River January 3, 2015 at 10:48 PM Leonora, Thank you! and thank you for the review too. I really appreciate the feedback. As you know that is so important to all of us to improve our writing. Good, bad, or indifferent, any kind feedback is good. thanks again for the review. Kriver

Anne-Lise Andresen September 7, 2014 at 5:05 AM - Hey kr - Congratulations on winning poem in the contest: "River Walk" - Well done, I like it :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :) K River January 3, 2015 at 10:54 PM Anne Lise, Thank you, I appreciate your taking the time to read and review. The feedback is really important to me. I am very new to this poetry writing stuff. K River

Andrea Dietrich September 6, 2014 at 10:50 PM very nice message. Congrats for your win. K River January 3, 2015 at 10:55 PM Hi Andrea, Thank you Kriver

Brenda Meier-Hans September 6, 2014 at 10:25 AM Congratulations on this unique Haiku. Brilliant comparison with God. K River January 3, 2015 at 11:00 PM Hi Brenda, Thank you, for the complements. I really do appreciate your comments. K River

Faye Gibson September 6, 2014 at 9:28 AM Congratulations....like a might River is God's perfect peace. K River January 3, 2015 at 11:55 PM Hi Fay,Thank you for the comment and the compliment too.

Pandita Sietesantos September 6, 2014 at 9:17 AM Congratulations on a fine win! Excellent Haiku. Pandita

Jan Allison September 6, 2014 at 7:00 AM lovely haiku many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Dr.Ram Mehta September 6, 2014 at 5:11 AM Congrats on this fine win, kr river

Poet Destroyer A September 5, 2014 at 11:22 PM KR RIVER, :). Congratulations, on an awesome River Walk, Win:):):) Enjoy the smiles, and my blog, You're a "River Legend" if you'd like or have time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~ K River January 4, 2015 at 12:04 AM Hi there Linda, Thank you for the compliment. i did enjoy the blog too. I hope you will review some more of my work too. K River

Anne-Lise Andresen August 27, 2014 at 11:49 AM - Great haiku, kr ! - Luck in contest! - // Anne-Lise :) K River January 4, 2015 at 12:06 AM Anne Lise, Thank you for the compliment, and the encouragement too. K River