Connie Marcum Wong Poet Couplet

God's Presence

God’s Presence

I pray for peace, my worldly goal
That each and ev’ry sacred soul
Will feel the essence of your might,
To feel your presence day and night

1-17-20

Arbitrium Divisa 6 Poetry Contest ~N/A~
Judged on 1-27-2020

1-10-20

In Praise of God Poetry Contest~First Place~
Sponsored by Kim Rodrigues
Poem this verse was taken from is “In Praise of God”

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Paul Schneiter February 23, 2020 at 1:18 PM Dear Connie, This is touching, moving, and sweet. It's an understatement for me to say that you "reached" me with it. Thanks sooooo much for posting it. Hugs, Paul Connie Marcum Wong February 24, 2020 at 3:54 AM I so appreciate your wonderful comment Paul. I am having a great day. My Granddaughter was born today...a preemie weighing 2.89 lbs but she is well developed and strong thank the Lord. Thank you my friend. xxoo

Phyllis Babcock January 29, 2020 at 4:27 PM Lovely words Connie. Enjoyed reading. love phyl

Sara Kendrick January 21, 2020 at 5:57 PM Enjoyed reading this one. Peace would be wonderful but we all know that until Jesus comes again that will not happen except moments of time within ourselves. Sara

Ann Foster January 20, 2020 at 8:55 AM Lovely. Valuable ... a small treasure that can be kept in the mind. :) Ann

Jenish Somadas January 19, 2020 at 9:25 PM Wow..It is rhyming in every word.. Poets can do magic even the words are so scarce..

Lindsay Laurie January 19, 2020 at 6:24 PM G'day Connie … a lovely prayer for a child at bedtime - thank you Connie - Lindsay Connie Marcum Wong January 19, 2020 at 7:35 PM I will have to share it with my Granddaughters who are eight and Grandson who just turned 10. Thank you Lindsay. xxoo

Robert L. Hinshaw January 19, 2020 at 9:16 AM Connie, I join you in that very beautiful and appropriate prayer. A sure top winner in the contest! Glad Pall Revere's ride gave you a laff. Best to you and your family in 2020 and the years beyond - Bob H

Demetrios Trifiatis January 19, 2020 at 5:49 AM AMEN! So marvellously written prayer dearest, Connie! It uplifts the heart and soul! Connie Marcum Wong January 19, 2020 at 7:42 PM Thank you very much Demetrios. Have a great week. xxoo

Jennifer Proxenos January 19, 2020 at 12:47 AM WOW Connie - I simply love this verse, a prayer that we should all remember and fav. in order to read it often. Well penned my friend, this is a winner. Blessings, Jennifer.

Evelyn Judy Buehler January 18, 2020 at 11:16 PM What a wonderful prayer, filled with good will for all! Divine.

Kim Rodrigues January 18, 2020 at 3:41 PM Yes, His precious peace!

Rico Leffanta January 18, 2020 at 1:11 PM A Double-whammy! Well done! Aloha! Rico

Vijay Pandit January 18, 2020 at 6:52 AM Such divine sentiments, Connie--loved the serenity of your words.

Sandra Adams January 18, 2020 at 6:50 AM wonderful prayer, perhaps if they all felt his presence and love there would be less ugliness in this world...hugs and blessings Connie :) XoXo

Jan Allison January 18, 2020 at 3:26 AM a lovely uplifting prayer Connie:-) hugs Jan xx