God's Presence

God’s Presence

I pray for peace, my worldly goal
That each and ev’ry sacred soul
Will feel the essence of your might,
To feel your presence day and night

1-17-20

Arbitrium Divisa 6 Poetry Contest ~N/A~
Judged on 1-27-2020

1-10-20

In Praise of God Poetry Contest~First Place~
Sponsored by Kim Rodrigues
Poem this verse was taken from is “In Praise of God”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 2/23/2020 1:18:00 PM
Dear Connie, This is touching, moving, and sweet. It's an understatement for me to say that you "reached" me with it. Thanks sooooo much for posting it. Hugs, Paul
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/24/2020 3:54:00 AM
I so appreciate your wonderful comment Paul. I am having a great day. My Granddaughter was born today...a preemie weighing 2.89 lbs but she is well developed and strong thank the Lord. Thank you my friend. xxoo
Date: 1/29/2020 4:27:00 PM
Lovely words Connie. Enjoyed reading. love phyl
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Date: 1/21/2020 5:57:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one. Peace would be wonderful but we all know that until Jesus comes again that will not happen except moments of time within ourselves. Sara
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Date: 1/20/2020 8:55:00 AM
Lovely. Valuable ... a small treasure that can be kept in the mind. :) Ann
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Date: 1/19/2020 9:25:00 PM
Wow..It is rhyming in every word.. Poets can do magic even the words are so scarce..
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Date: 1/19/2020 6:24:00 PM
G'day Connie … a lovely prayer for a child at bedtime - thank you Connie - Lindsay
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/19/2020 7:35:00 PM
I will have to share it with my Granddaughters who are eight and Grandson who just turned 10. Thank you Lindsay. xxoo
Date: 1/19/2020 9:16:00 AM
Connie, I join you in that very beautiful and appropriate prayer. A sure top winner in the contest! Glad Pall Revere's ride gave you a laff. Best to you and your family in 2020 and the years beyond - Bob H
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Date: 1/19/2020 5:49:00 AM
AMEN! So marvellously written prayer dearest, Connie! It uplifts the heart and soul!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/19/2020 7:42:00 PM
Thank you very much Demetrios. Have a great week. xxoo
Date: 1/19/2020 12:47:00 AM
WOW Connie - I simply love this verse, a prayer that we should all remember and fav. in order to read it often. Well penned my friend, this is a winner. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/18/2020 11:16:00 PM
What a wonderful prayer, filled with good will for all! Divine.
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Date: 1/18/2020 3:41:00 PM
Yes, His precious peace!
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Date: 1/18/2020 1:11:00 PM
A Double-whammy! Well done! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 1/18/2020 6:52:00 AM
Such divine sentiments, Connie--loved the serenity of your words.
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Date: 1/18/2020 6:50:00 AM
wonderful prayer, perhaps if they all felt his presence and love there would be less ugliness in this world...hugs and blessings Connie :) XoXo
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Date: 1/18/2020 3:26:00 AM
a lovely uplifting prayer Connie:-) hugs Jan xx
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