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God's Peace Eased Rustic Grief

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Strains are carefully prevented with a tangle. Were you eager for me to return to my angle? It restored its fiery vigor due to the treble hook. As a result, I wiggle akin a fish in the hope of a look. In this yet another piece, rusty tones overrule. On a grimy patio, a rusted-out rock bewails. Your deft touch lashed a pale face balky. Worries that don't seem to act away quickly. Your anile escape boots are no longer active. There was a recent rise of a rich perspective. A pair of delicate slippers were subtly conveyed. It's two sizes vaster and boasts a range-wide. The earthy angst of your cramped spine. Waning whine faded by a support divine.
Written: October 21, 2021

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Date: 10/22/2021 6:04:00 AM
Finding peace through divinity--I hear your solemn words, Lasaad.
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Date: 10/22/2021 1:14:00 AM
I know well enough what grief is. But the Almighty is there to help if we ask.
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