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God's Own Country

A short pleasant drive through the pathway Between the impenetrable woodlands lying untamed - Cradled by soft wind, the scenic lush foliage I gaped at During my recent visit to my homeland Enriched and cheered my dreary mind; Fresh breeze, so pure, gently tousled my hair Giving me a feel that right then I was Heading towards a heavenly hamlet; the Idyllic green cover was embellished with mangoes, enormous and Jackfruits, huge. The flowering trees with vivid blooms formed a Kaleidoscope of colours glinting in soft sunlight after a drizzle; Lofty trees shaped a canopy of leaves, so artistic, and glued My eyes to its pristine rustic charming beauty: No wonder this land is called ‘God’s Own Country’ - Of all the beautiful places, here is Nature at Her best! Ponds, lakes and streams were fringed with long Queues of coconut trees, some leaning over the lakes - Reflecting and glistening in the water below; Shh! The soft silvery clouds and the misty hills seemed To be engaged in a cosy-chat - so dreamy and enchanting; Upon the luxuriant land sprawled large spindly rubber trees - Verdurous, lined up in orderly rows - so mystic - as if Wishing to whisper a secret in my ears. Listening to Xylophone music from my son’s mobile, so peaceful, my mind Yearned to glance more at Her graceful face!...as the Zig-zag road, untiring, unfurled before my eyes, with its twists and turns. Date: 06/23/2022 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 16 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Mark Toney

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Date: 10/22/2022 9:42:00 AM
Dearest Ani, I revel in your picturesque imagery, so vivid and intense, as to bring me on this journey with you rejoicing in the beauty of ‘God’s Own Country’! I adore this naturally flowing Abecedarian and I especially love your last "Zig-zag" line for a grand finale to an exquisite poem. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/13/2022 7:55:00 PM
This is a most delightful read, Ani. Not only did you make it through the alphabet without making it sound forced and mechanical, you also took us along for the ride full of energy and imagery so we could experience the beauty of "God's Own Country." Nicely done! Congratulations on your win on Mile 16 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 17 has already started.
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Date: 6/29/2022 11:16:00 PM
Though floods during these three to four years have been devastating the natural adornments of the beautiful little state, Kerala, still is preserving the pristine beauty sown in it by the Almighty. A very beautiful poem. Happy to hear from you after a very long time.
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Date: 6/26/2022 1:43:00 PM
oh isn't this one what you posted on FB? So glad to see it here, and I guess I never commented to it here. I sure hope you find time to write a lot more, Ani, you are so talented.
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Date: 6/24/2022 4:04:00 PM
I love this form, Ani, and the poem so lovely. The journey for myself a whole new experience. So much to admire in your poetry. Harry
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Date: 6/24/2022 9:33:00 AM
I am proud to read this mesmerizing description of my own state. Yes, with a medley of backwaters, coconut, mango and jack fruit trees,rubber plantations and a rich verdure of green vegetation, our land excels in scenic beauty and cultural diversity. I am sure your trip must have been very enjoyable. Happy to read your beautiful poem after a long gap, Ani....!
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Date: 6/23/2022 11:23:00 AM
Ani, Yay ! You did post this ! So very happy to read it here ! A beautiful magical dreamy journey in your heart through God's Country. So delicious in its descriptions. I love Kerala the way you have described it and hope to visit one day. Big hugs to you my friend, Susan :)
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 6/23/2022 11:08:00 PM
Dearest Susan, so glad to read your lovely comment. Yes, am posting a poem here after a long time... Was a bit busy travelling to my native place... Yes my friend Kerala is beautiful...sure do make a visit to this lovely place my friend... Have a blessed day...Big hugs and love back at you... ~ Ani
Date: 6/23/2022 9:52:00 AM
What a wonderful/beautiful write and journey. Love It. Have a blessed day...............
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 6/23/2022 11:02:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Paula... Have a blessed day... Hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 6/23/2022 6:09:00 AM
A delightful journey through heavenly piece of paradise you so eloquently describe, Ani. Your native place is nature's wonderland as you lovingly convey. A FAVE from me for this beautiful painting unfolding through your words. I am certain you and the family feel blessed to be there.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 6/23/2022 7:04:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear Vijayji for reading my poem and for your wonderful comments and the Fav, I will be reading your poem soon... God bless... ~ Ani

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