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God's Orchard

A gilded orchard,
Golden grove of apple trees;
Silver roots of sin.

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Abe Lopez

April 18, 2009 at 12:25 PM

Greatness is easily layerd through your lines.

Tyler Davis

April 18, 2009 at 12:01 AM

An orchard of gold.

Steve Edmonds

April 5, 2009 at 5:25 PM

Amazing, golden apples and silver roots on the trees.

Belinda Parish

April 4, 2009 at 11:14 PM

What can I say but another Wonderful write from Raul.........

Chris Goombi

April 3, 2009 at 8:35 PM

Divine bling, bling.

Elizabeth Neal

April 3, 2009 at 8:22 PM

Amazing imagery, silver roots of sin. Love E.

Tyler Martin

April 3, 2009 at 7:51 PM

The imagery blings. Tyler

John Weber

April 3, 2009 at 11:39 AM

Fun allusion to Genesis at the end there, Raul! Superb as always from your quill, good sir! Warm regards, John.

Daniel Neal

April 3, 2009 at 11:33 AM

I can see them shining bright, nice job, DN

Christopher Higgins

April 3, 2009 at 4:06 AM

This is most excellent my friend...you turned up the notch with your writing of late..great writing.

Brian Strand

April 3, 2009 at 1:40 AM

Ecellent Raul.One for my favourites.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Keith Bickerstaffe

April 3, 2009 at 12:37 AM

Very well constructed and expressed! Superb alliteration, imagery and word choices... Well done Raul!! Best wishes, Keith

Lena Townsend

April 2, 2009 at 11:27 PM

Awesome write as usual. Love the connection to a similar garden I have read about. "Silver roots of sin"~ this is fabulous! And with the silver and gold this one could have so many meanings behind it. Thought provoking... Smiles from Lolita