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God's Orchard

A gilded orchard, Golden grove of apple trees; Silver roots of sin.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/18/2009 12:25:00 PM
Greatness is easily layerd through your lines.
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Date: 4/18/2009 12:01:00 AM
An orchard of gold.
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Date: 4/5/2009 5:25:00 PM
Amazing, golden apples and silver roots on the trees.
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Date: 4/4/2009 11:14:00 PM
What can I say but another Wonderful write from Raul.........
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Date: 4/3/2009 8:35:00 PM
Divine bling, bling.
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Date: 4/3/2009 8:22:00 PM
Amazing imagery, silver roots of sin. Love E.
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Date: 4/3/2009 7:51:00 PM
The imagery blings. Tyler
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Date: 4/3/2009 11:39:00 AM
Fun allusion to Genesis at the end there, Raul! Superb as always from your quill, good sir! Warm regards, John.
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Date: 4/3/2009 11:33:00 AM
I can see them shining bright, nice job, DN
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Date: 4/3/2009 4:06:00 AM
This is most excellent my friend...you turned up the notch with your writing of late..great writing.
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Date: 4/3/2009 1:40:00 AM
Ecellent Raul.One for my favourites.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 4/3/2009 12:37:00 AM
Very well constructed and expressed! Superb alliteration, imagery and word choices... Well done Raul!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 4/2/2009 11:27:00 PM
Awesome write as usual. Love the connection to a similar garden I have read about. "Silver roots of sin"~ this is fabulous! And with the silver and gold this one could have so many meanings behind it. Thought provoking... Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 4/2/2009 8:25:00 PM
Nice reference to the book of Genesis, Raul! I might succumb to temptation now and enjoy a "gilded" apple. Awesome!
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