God's Opinion

A baby is born Under a Jewish star His mother weeps All around her is marching That torturous sound haunting her day and night Here in a basement they hide Hiding for days, for weeks, for months Her faith is failing the propaganda is overwhelming But she waits in that basement Hiding in that dark nothingness She hears glass breaking All around her are screams That torturous sound haunting her day and night She wakes one day from the sound of boots Walking down the stairs A man in black unstraps his helmet Showing his clean cut hair As he discards his cigarette He pulls out his Luger She weeps The man in black puts away his pistol Leaving behind two dead bodies And some who are starving, sick, and weak Huddled in quarters worse then barns Look up to the heavens And wonder why the world should go on And a baby is born
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 8/4/2011 11:33:00 PM
This is great Sean. .... a pleasure to read...thanks so much for sharing..!!!!!!
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Date: 7/26/2011 11:29:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup... enjoy the site with its many features as u continue to share words of creativity with luv... as this dramatic piece...
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Date: 7/26/2011 6:53:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Sean. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 7/25/2011 9:17:00 PM
Creative and thought provoking write, Sean
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