This is an Elfchen, a little poem of eleven words in five lines.
Redemption* Heavenly gift God’s miraculous work Faith assuring eternal life Fulfillment *Psalms 130:7 ... With the LORD there is mercy, and with him is plenteous redemption. January 19, 2025 Honorable Mention, "2025 posted Short form" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand; judged on 1/19/2025
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