God's Lullaby

hush whirring worries
let calm and faith take over
cradled in God's arms...


*** July 27, 2010
for Linda's Soul Speaks senryu :)
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August 25, 2011 at 5:43 AM
Very calm and soothing poem to reflect your beliefs, nikko. It helps to think stop worrying. Liked that your started this senryu with 'hush'.
Sweetheart Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 12:38 PM
Hey girl ...just stopping by to say 'hi' ...hope u have a happy weekend.. and good luck with your Twist contest... with luv..
Bloomsfield Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 7:18 AM
beautiful!just warm and beautiful!C.C.
Kendrick Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 4:15 AM
Great faith write that is something that we all can hold onto if we just will or can ...Thanks for the comments on my poetry and blog..Sara
Knop Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 3:39 AM
Hi Nikko, umaasa ako ikaw ay may isang magandang araw! Nice Senryu with beautiful words! Best of luck for Linda-Marie's contest!...Have a nice time!...Ingat!...Ger:)
Dietrich Avatar
July 28, 2010 at 6:22 PM
a fav
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July 28, 2010 at 6:21 PM
Nikko, this reads beautifully. It is superb. I do not even know how you rated. but it looks like you won. Later I will check out all these wins. I sure hope to! Luv, Andrea
Neels Avatar
July 28, 2010 at 12:23 PM
Congrats sleeping beauty.. Good morning to you :)
A  Avatar
July 28, 2010 at 8:21 AM
A wonderful Senryu NIKKO.-SKAT
Liu Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 8:53 PM
enjoyable write...
Mehta Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 4:50 PM
Congrats on the win, Nikko
Brumley Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 2:56 PM
Yes, lets! Congrats on your win in the contest Nikko, well done!
Johnson Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 1:33 PM
Congraltulationa on your winning poem Very nice. Love, Joyce
Freeman Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 12:06 PM
Congratulations Nikko. On your poem's success in Linda's contest. Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 11:56 AM
Congratulations Nikko on your win in Linda-Marie Bariana's contest "Soul Speaks Senryu". Love, Carol
Roberts Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 11:49 AM
Gorgeous , congrats on your win, Francine
Sweetheart Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 11:47 AM
Congrats Nikko on your third place win in my Soup Speaks contest... wonderful words... thankxxx for supporting my contest endeavors.. with luv..
Culverhouse Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 6:33 AM
enjoyed reading your works today! Great write!
Mehta Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 3:21 AM
A nice theme of faith for the Senryu. Good luck in the contest
Pace Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 3:14 AM
love the message... whirring? /i'll have to go look that up (thanks for the new word) Kevin
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