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God's Little Poet

He poked his head
betwix mine write
for the likes of I
to address his query

"Do I blend in
Pops
do my words
sense"

The tears 
fell

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 9/8/2015 7:27:00 PM

This is a very nice write, very nice indeed :)

James Peranteau
Date: 6/3/2021 12:06:00 AM

The belated ty dear poet

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/14/2010 8:29:00 PM

James,"wow! your spell bounding words are captured perfect in this poem. A little sad with happy spirited emotions to go through. Amazing with them deep thoughts. But, like you said at the end, ( the tears fell )I really did enjoyed the ending. take care,..p.d.

James Peranteau
Date: 6/3/2021 12:06:00 AM

U always cause the muses contagious to this sensitive man(I didn’t say that) az soon as my friends read my last post, be prepared for old James to tickle yourn beautiful

Audrey Haick

Date: 9/15/2010 8:33:00 PM

Perfect imagery of your little angel wanting to share time with you, James..This tugs at my heart, so. Definitely a fav. Blessings to you and yours, always. Peace, Audrey

James Peranteau
Date: 6/3/2021 12:02:00 AM

Ty love

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/5/2010 9:12:00 AM

This is a favorite of mine.. So much captured James.

James Peranteau
Date: 6/3/2021 12:01:00 AM

*winks

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 9/1/2010 2:38:00 PM

Was so nice a terrific read.Thanks for congrats on my win.Teresa

Daver Austin

Date: 8/10/2010 10:36:00 AM

Alas...Babel! These old farts just don't understand us young fellers. James! Where art thou. Been lookin' for that humor. Dave

James Peranteau
Date: 6/3/2021 12:25:00 AM

Rest whilst u can my dear Daver uv yore, I’m practicing the mandolin so when I come up with you, you’ll be busy helping me praise Jah with song and muuuuse(ic)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/3/2010 7:41:00 PM

Oh James.. I do remember when my sons used to do the same to me.. I have two who continue to write now and then.. even as adults...but they always had to write when Mommy wrote.. can totally relate to those tears my friend.. we miss u..with luv..

John Loving Iii

Date: 8/3/2010 5:23:00 PM

proud popa. John Henry Loving III

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/28/2010 6:26:00 PM

Awwww, so sweet, James!

James Peranteau
Date: 6/3/2021 12:24:00 AM

Then yeah, now the giant fluffs and luvz me up like his stuffy perro, it’s ouch and oooch instead of goosebumps now, save when I’m alone and my engram begins spilling remembers uv his love for me

John Loving Iii

Date: 7/24/2010 9:56:00 AM

when the spirit speaks....

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 7/22/2010 10:11:00 AM

That would be little Noah,and I know he's gonna be an excellent writer,even better than his pops,a kiss for Noah!

James Peranteau
Date: 6/2/2021 11:47:00 PM

I just realized what u insinuated back when dear poet....* smiles

Diiamond Rich

Date: 7/13/2010 7:02:00 AM

A beautiful read. Also thank you for your kind words on my latest if you have time please check out my saga, criminal part 3- ofcourse its not true just a story. Have a great day.

Thereal Jp

Date: 7/10/2010 7:13:00 AM

Great poem. Still leaves me wondering how many kids one has to go through before they start their emotional bond together. Sometimes They Come Back!

James Peranteau
Date: 6/2/2021 11:45:00 PM

Never mind, anywho, a belated ty

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 7/9/2010 2:01:00 PM

I can see a chip of the old block coming. The apple doesn’t fall too far from the tree, as we all see. I like the family love and father/son unity demonstrated in this poem. Keep the quill flowing. Great job! Joseph

James Peranteau
Date: 6/2/2021 11:44:00 PM

U nailed this dear poet, much love, james

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/9/2010 10:56:00 AM

Oh, I can just hear Noah asking you if he "blends in," James. If I were you, I'd tell him, "No, son, you stand out!" Somehow children feel the need to fit in even more than adults do. Dry those tears and give him a hug for me! Love, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/9/2010 8:50:00 AM

Enjoyed reading...

Jesu Johnson

Date: 7/8/2010 7:55:00 PM

hummmm. i got a mental picture of this... very interesting!!!!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/8/2010 7:02:00 PM

Such an emotional write James.. can just see the scene in my mind.. touching and heartfelt.. having four sons of my own.. I can totally relate.. enjoy while young..they grow up so fast... with luv..

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