God's Heavenly Mountain

Skeptal I still followed others up the mountain
Voices said do not fret for God speaks from this mountain


Valley and creeks and eagles that soar
Suitable for a me to continue climbing this God forsaken mountain

Time can be at nil for there my destiny awaits 
Tranquility bliss and solace of it's mountain

Relish with me if you will if you must if you can
Shout from the highest peaks of this skeptal mountain

There is a new day a new beginning and a new you
Only if you take this journey beyond God's Heavenly mountain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 7:12 AM
Great write in this Ghazal...We all have our mountain to climb and overcome...Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for the comments on my workl..I posted the Haiku that you read to late to be in the contest but I enjoyed writing it...It just seemed to flow...Sara
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