Dan Kearley Poet Rhyme

Gods Hand

I wonder sometimes how many people
Are living their very lives like me
With a forever forgiving love filled heart
Thats constantly praying for all they see?

Feeling as though I'm being guided by Gods hand
Observing the people all around our town
Watching them all make their life choices
Before they are placed below ground

I know there are alot of others like me
That live life filled with His heartfelt love
What we need to do is start showing it
As He watches down on us all from above



Dan Kearley:1-3-12

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Lucilla Carrillo March 16, 2013 at 4:51 PM Dan; this is very beautiful. god is always whtching us and He knows our every move. I want Him to always watch over me. Thanks. Lucilla

Nathan Phillips April 10, 2012 at 8:21 PM Great poem. Great message. Really enjoyed it.

Chrishanna Powell January 10, 2012 at 8:20 PM Well written......Great message!

M.I.A . January 4, 2012 at 8:23 PM What we need to do is start showing it... working on it too ;) great piece of advise.

Jim Pemberton January 4, 2012 at 6:25 PM Thank you for your words of wisdom and inspiration! I give you my thanks and appreciation!

Anne-Lise Andresen January 4, 2012 at 2:07 PM Bless you Dan,Amen! oxox love Anne-Lise

Maureen Lefanue January 4, 2012 at 2:06 AM Enjoyable poem, Dan. Thanks for your kind comment re my poem. God bless :) M

Andrea Dietrich January 3, 2012 at 10:52 PM wow, I hope a lot of people are like you, DAn. What a wonderful way to be! Good poem. I enjoyed it.

Kim Merryman January 3, 2012 at 9:11 PM Enjoyed your poem, Dan. I agree with you that we need to be more active in showing God's love to others through what we say and do. God Bless. Love, Kim

Robert Pettit January 3, 2012 at 7:38 PM A great poem with fine descriptiveness and rhyming. It is customary to capitalize the first letter of all pronouns referring to God, therefore, "his" and "he" should begin with a capital "H". Also, in the first line of the third verse, you have "their" where you should have "there". You have merely used the incorrect homophone in that case.