Unseeking Seeker Poet Haiku

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Gods Grace - El

elements five, our forms lace
earth, water, fire, air, space
to aliveness integral
gateway to Gods miracles 
think not hermit, simply feel
soundless bliss thunder appeal
elements five, our forms lace 

07-July-2021

Elemental poetry contest
Sponsor: Charles Messina

Notes: This form consists of 7-lines, 7-syllables each line. The rhyme pattern is AABBCCA. Also, the first and last lines must be the same. An "Elemental" must pertain to the three elements- (earth, water, sky). 

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Bhawana Pant July 31, 2021 at 10:22 AM Congrats!! Soundless bliss thunder appeal elements five , our forms lace. Great!! Unseeking Seeker July 31, 2021 at 11:07 PM Thanks, Bhawana!

Charles Messina July 31, 2021 at 5:29 AM Wonderfully written, Unseeking Seeker. Great poetry...Congratulations on your fine win! Charlie Unseeking Seeker July 31, 2021 at 5:55 AM Thank you, Charles! Your effort, sponsoring the contest

Christuraj Alex July 31, 2021 at 4:34 AM Beautifully Written. Congratulations on your placement! Unseeking Seeker July 31, 2021 at 5:56 AM Thank you Chris! Must have a look at the results now

Sam Kauffman July 7, 2021 at 11:12 AM Truly the elements are a "gateway to God's miracles!" Delightful joy, awakening "awareness," shining through every line Seeker! Best wishes and blessings for the contest. :D Unseeking Seeker July 7, 2021 at 6:12 PM Thank you, Sam!

Victor Buhagiar July 7, 2021 at 5:38 AM Very original writing. Wonder about your hermit?

Mahtab Bangalee July 7, 2021 at 2:23 AM excellent creative writtings Unseeking Seeker July 7, 2021 at 3:45 AM Thanks, Mahtab!