God's Grace

Beneath the diamond dust.
Of the twilight of the moon.

Thoughts of you float by my eyes.
My mind spins into a thousand lines.

Silver threads weave their way thru my soul.
And I am once again transported back in time.

The moon at the time was a blush of scarlet red.
As the heavens opened up and the stars fled.

As every grain of sand turned into a gem.
And the sea spoke eloquently with Him. 

 I watched the stars come back to twinkle in the sky.
The truth of God is hidden like a treasure in the light.

Though the canopy of this great land knows well his touch.
The deep blue of the night skies holds his mystical touch.

As the flowers did bow in God's holy light 
and spread the seeds of God's everlasting grace.    


Sat. 6: pm  7/ 20/ 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 3/2/2018 4:33:00 AM
Hi Debbie You out did others in writing such a beautiful praise for God. All the lines are unique but i would like to mention the last line. All creatures of God praise God in their own words and style,some bow before God which we can observe in plants , etc As per the Holy Books, all the things praise Mountains, trees, plants, sea, animals, birds etc praise God but we don't understand their words. "As the flowers did bow in Gods holy light and spread the seeds of Gods everlasting grace. "
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Date: 3/2/2018 4:33:00 AM
Thanks for refering this beautiful poem...i would like you to refer some more best poems of you...
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Date: 7/3/2017 11:18:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem about the power of God's creations, Debbie, enjoyed the read:)
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Date: 3/8/2016 8:22:00 PM
Your body of work is impressive! This caught my eye and I will enjoy reading your works! There are great visual images while reading this! Do Write On!... Write On! :-)
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Date: 8/26/2015 8:49:00 PM
I liked the imagery and the variables you have in this one.
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Date: 9/4/2013 3:46:00 PM
Nicely done. I really like this one
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Date: 8/10/2013 10:17:00 PM
God is an amazing inspiration. Beautiful, wonderful work. Always, Laura
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Date: 8/5/2013 5:08:00 PM
and all is well under heavens light... lovely verse babe...
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 8/5/2013 5:29:00 PM
I thank you Don ;}
Date: 8/2/2013 8:42:00 PM
Love this wonderful piece . I think we find God in everything if we only take the time to look around us. love phyl
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 8/2/2013 9:23:00 PM
Thank you phyl ;}
Date: 7/28/2013 6:12:00 PM
Today I am in Oklahoma, and I think this place missed out. Actually, the people are really cool. It's fun. Your story about your wire tapping is very interesting. Our privacy is moot in this day and age. No place to hide in the web unless one is an experienced hacker which I am not.
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 7/28/2013 8:44:00 PM
Thanks for reading Duke ;}
Date: 7/24/2013 5:30:00 PM
and the presence felt was so svelte, just a brush of angel wings, a heart an soul were lifted helped, freedom floating yes was felt, and gone were earthly things, peace harmonic brings....
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 7/24/2013 7:19:00 PM
Thank you Don ;}
Date: 7/24/2013 2:33:00 PM
wow, going back into time and creation. This is really cool. very pretty and I loved the line about "the heavens opened up and the stars fled." So your fifty page book. Does it contain all these poems you have posted at Soup? I write my poems on paper but then print them out from my files. luv, Andrea
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 7/24/2013 3:45:00 PM
Thank you Andrea , It only contains * 8 of them .
Date: 7/21/2013 1:32:00 PM
Naturally, God's love light shines. Fifty feet high above the pines. The northern lights dance with delight. Exclaiming all that is so right. May God's grace shine on your face Debbie. Thanks for the insperation.
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 7/21/2013 5:13:00 PM
Thank you Robert ;}
Date: 7/21/2013 9:29:00 AM
Tremendous. The color & atmosphere in these lines shined so brilliantly. Strong message here!
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 7/21/2013 10:08:00 AM
Thank you Drake ;}
Date: 7/21/2013 7:17:00 AM
- Beautiful words from a talented poet !! - Have a fine Sunday, Debbie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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