God's Fold

plain wooden cross
     atop
          tired 
               ethereal chapel 



unkempt
     courtyard
          crushed dreams 
               of detached young


10/7/2020

Writing Challenge - Septolet Form - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France
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Krutsinger Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 9:16 PM
Congratulations. Well penned.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 9:28 PM
Congratulations on a well-written septolet. Great contrast.
La France Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 6:34 AM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge- Septolet with this excellent poem, a FAV for me _Constance
Dietrich Avatar
October 10, 2020 at 5:33 PM
wow, this is deep and so good, Eve. Congrats to you.
Andresen Avatar
October 10, 2020 at 1:05 PM
- Beautifully written, Eve :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ranaweera  Avatar
October 10, 2020 at 12:52 PM
Congratulations, Eve, on your top win in the contest for this musical piece!!
Proxenos Avatar
October 10, 2020 at 10:02 AM
You write beautifully Eve and I detect a winning poem here with Constance - stay safe my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Buhagiar Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 10:54 AM
Time for a renewal in my opinion...before it is too late. ~~
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