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God's Dying Sky

Man's made sky. The sky's known beginning and unknown ending. I look to the sky because I'm interested about the unknown. I should look to the sky for answers I all ready know. Sometimes I find myself giving the sky a quick gaze. Then three hours later, find myself in a complete confused daze. Is this caused from my interest about the unknown. Or by subconsciously soul searching for answers I all ready know. The adventurous flow of the sky brings me much needed hope. Especially when man has the world headed towards a down spiral slope. Sometimes while focused on the sky, in some type of trance like steer. All I can feel, is its man's created fear. Thoughts of how it was once so pure and how now oil based waters brings no cure. Man's made sky. the sky's known beginning and unknown ending. American Ocean Billy's ( black gold that is ) 6-3-2010

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Date: 4/5/2015 10:32:00 PM
TONY, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Have yourself a Happy Easter Love LINDA
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Date: 10/7/2014 11:49:00 AM
Tony, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 9/30/2014 6:31:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Tony - I choose your first very well and lovely written poem - I like it a lot - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/27/2014 10:33:00 AM
A nice poem bears depth without any doubt. Manifestation is not real in all the ways except that's of reality. Assumption helps to find out the truth but assumption is merely assumption. Beautifully done, my lovely new poet friend. Loved always,bl
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Date: 9/25/2014 6:26:00 PM
Tony,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Tony Driskell
Date: 9/26/2014 10:18:00 PM
Thanks for reading and thank You for your the offer. I'm not a member yet though, does that mean I can enter your contest? or......

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