Gods Design

We send them off to foreign lands
With all they own in their hands
Forced to trek across barren sands
Blindly follow their given commands.

What’s the purpose… is it right?
What does it serve… when we fight
Is it simply…  a warrior’s delight
And now it looks… no end in sight.

We’ve fought and taken another hill
Look how easy it’s become to kill
They say it’s done for God’s will
And as routine… as taking a pill.

Then one day… they will return
From the land and the trees they burn
Fuse with society they’ll have to learn
How well they adjust is of concern.

As they age tales will be told
The idea of war is then sold
As a way of life in the fold
Forever the people remain controlled.

I will never understand mankind
Sometimes we appear so blind
Revert to violence we are so inclined
Perhaps this was…  in God’s design.


By Greg Stanley
Entry in "Another Chance To Swing Poetry Contest"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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December 15, 2011 at 3:32 PM
A philosophical tho't, Greg! Congrats on pondering the insanity of mankind thru your writing! Congrats on your placement in Chris's contest...he is a great critic! Happy Holidays. Gwendolen
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December 15, 2011 at 11:47 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Chris' contest Greg. Love, Carol
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December 15, 2011 at 11:33 AM
Congratulations x
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November 4, 2011 at 4:42 PM
I can tell by the rhyming that this must have taken you a while. As I too try to make them, I have the utmost respect for poems that are designed to make you think, very well done.   KMD
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November 4, 2011 at 4:10 PM
Excellently done! Thought provoking read dear friend. Million thx for sharing!
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