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Godforsaken

The sharp shrill scream sounds As an echo in a cave Trembling surroundings As spectre wanders sadly To be saved from the condemn 2-28-2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/1/2016 3:55:00 PM
Great title on this eerie atmospheric tanka!
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/1/2016 4:46:00 PM
Thank you Andrea
Date: 2/28/2016 3:10:00 PM
A chilling sad piece Nayda. Superb imagery!
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 2/28/2016 4:58:00 PM
Thank you Connie

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