Godforsaken

The sharp shrill scream sounds
As an echo in a cave
Trembling surroundings 
As spectre wanders sadly
To be saved from the condemn 












2-28-2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 3:55 PM
Great title on this eerie atmospheric tanka!
Negron Flores Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 4:46 PM
Thank you Andrea
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 3:10 PM
A chilling sad piece Nayda. Superb imagery!
Negron Flores Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 4:58 PM
Thank you Connie
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