God-Fatherism: I

the cape of fanfare
vampires raw rampage
for a common slavery.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
October 23, 2009 at 9:41 AM
last line..form of common slavery?? Canny it should be 5/7/5 soup mail
Amah Avatar
October 22, 2009 at 10:14 PM
Kill poetic innovation? Shakespeare got us the Elizabethan sonnet out of the Italian sonnet … I trust, that’s what has happened to have most new sub-genres of poetry & other forms of literary art … & what I don’t understand, I don’t comment on! This subject has been heated-up in my part of the world, nothing mis-leading about it … it has razed our communities here … pls educate me more. Smile!!! Canny.
Loving Iii Avatar
October 22, 2009 at 5:37 PM
extreamly misleading.
Shahwan Avatar
October 22, 2009 at 2:46 PM
Alright. Good poem but pls consider 5/7/5 cylab and re-entry...please as: The cape of fanfare, vampires raw rampage, for a common slavery. I'm looking forward to reading more of your beautiful poetry.
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