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Goddess of the Nile

The Nile drifts restlessly in fresh woodland
Babbling over rocks and marbled edges…
Like a goddess in search of her old legends.




2/17/2016
PD's Contest:  River of dreams 
(three liner poem or 3 monoku) 

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Teddy Kimathi Date: 2/26/2016 5:44:00 AM I love the way you portray the Nile in your verse. It's as though it has breath.... Congrats Nette, for your beautiful, enchanting WIN in the contest!!! ;-) Login to Reply

Rhoma Em Date: 2/22/2016 2:02:00 PM To the queen of poetry, congratulations! Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 2/21/2016 10:31:00 PM Congrats on ur awesome win with this wonderful monoku nette.. Login to Reply

Susan Gentry Date: 2/21/2016 2:28:00 PM Congratulations! Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 2/21/2016 2:15:00 PM Congratulations to the goddess of the Nile!:) Pleased to be back to laud this lovely winning poem, Nette ~ hugs // paul Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 2/21/2016 1:30:00 PM Congratulations on your win, Nette! Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 2/21/2016 1:28:00 PM Congrats on your win my lovely friend, bl Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 2/21/2016 12:42:00 PM Lovely, Nette. Congratulations on your nice placement in the 'river of dreams' contest. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Sneha Rv Date: 2/21/2016 10:37:00 AM This is beautiful, dear Nette!! Congratulations on your lovely win!! :D :D Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/21/2016 10:19:00 AM another one that was a favorite of mine in this contest. Good to see it again on the winners' list.Congrats, Nette. Is your weekend going good? Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/21/2016 10:10:00 AM Nette, Congratulations on your flowing win. Enjoyed the imagery. Stop by my latest blog "Oh Beautiful Dreams" if you'd like. Enjoy your wonderful win and day. ~LINDA~ Login to Reply

Liam Mcdaid Date: 2/20/2016 5:15:00 AM It flows from the deep basin very beautifully penned nette wishing you a blessed week dear pal Login to Reply

Arlene Smith Date: 2/19/2016 2:55:00 PM Love the originality of your take on this contest!!.. Beautifully done dear friend.. Hugs.. Arlene Login to Reply

Timothy Hicks Date: 2/18/2016 11:54:00 PM Ooooh I liked where you took us with this, Nette. "old legends" for "dreams" ... most creative. Hope this does well. Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 2/18/2016 3:30:00 PM Absolutely beautiful, Nette!! Your river flows, in more ways than one; very creative, especially the end line. #7 I know this will do well:) hugs // paul Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 2/17/2016 10:33:00 PM Awesome Nette. I have a special affinity for Egypt. I hope this does well. ; ) Login to Reply

Kp Nunez Date: 2/17/2016 6:52:00 PM Flawlessly, flowing lines, Nette! All the best! huggs Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/17/2016 3:19:00 PM ohhh, that last line is really great for this kind of poem, Nette. Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 2/17/2016 1:18:00 PM Very dreamy, Nette. Elaine Login to Reply

Manny Paras Date: 2/17/2016 9:10:00 AM Darn creative approach on the topic with this remarkable poem. I am reminded of Cleopatra trying to relive her famed stature. Login to Reply

Norma Arana Date: 2/17/2016 9:05:00 AM You bring back the glory of the Nile River, personified and accentuated with her many tales! Brilliant way of doing the theme! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/17/2016 4:24:00 AM - A wonderful poem, Nette - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 2/17/2016 1:33:00 AM Captivating! Good luck, dear nette! Login to Reply