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Goddess of the Nile

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The Nile drifts restlessly in fresh woodland Babbling over rocks and marbled edges… Like a goddess in search of her old legends. 2/17/2016 PD's Contest: River of dreams (three liner poem or 3 monoku)

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 2/26/2016 5:44:00 AM

I love the way you portray the Nile in your verse. It's as though it has breath.... Congrats Nette, for your beautiful, enchanting WIN in the contest!!! ;-)

Rhoma Em

Date: 2/22/2016 2:02:00 PM

To the queen of poetry, congratulations!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/21/2016 10:31:00 PM

Congrats on ur awesome win with this wonderful monoku nette..

Susan Gentry

Date: 2/21/2016 2:28:00 PM

Congratulations!

Paul Callus

Date: 2/21/2016 2:15:00 PM

Congratulations to the goddess of the Nile!:) Pleased to be back to laud this lovely winning poem, Nette ~ hugs // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 2/21/2016 1:30:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Nette!

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/21/2016 1:28:00 PM

Congrats on your win my lovely friend, bl

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/21/2016 12:42:00 PM

Lovely, Nette. Congratulations on your nice placement in the 'river of dreams' contest. Hugs, Sandra

Sneha Rv

Date: 2/21/2016 10:37:00 AM

This is beautiful, dear Nette!! Congratulations on your lovely win!! :D :D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/21/2016 10:19:00 AM

another one that was a favorite of mine in this contest. Good to see it again on the winners' list.Congrats, Nette. Is your weekend going good?

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2016 10:10:00 AM

Nette, Congratulations on your flowing win. Enjoyed the imagery. Stop by my latest blog "Oh Beautiful Dreams" if you'd like. Enjoy your wonderful win and day. ~LINDA~

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 2/20/2016 5:15:00 AM

It flows from the deep basin very beautifully penned nette wishing you a blessed week dear pal

Arlene Smith

Date: 2/19/2016 2:55:00 PM

Love the originality of your take on this contest!!.. Beautifully done dear friend.. Hugs.. Arlene

Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/18/2016 11:54:00 PM

Ooooh I liked where you took us with this, Nette. "old legends" for "dreams" ... most creative. Hope this does well.

Paul Callus

Date: 2/18/2016 3:30:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful, Nette!! Your river flows, in more ways than one; very creative, especially the end line. #7 I know this will do well:) hugs // paul