Goddess of the Night

Pale face, blue eyes
goddess of the night
she fakes subtle smiles
wish I may, think I might
long for her in my sight
warm my heart, calm my mind
her eyes pierce through me even though she’s blind
I’d give my life if only I could, but she’d never accept it although she should
I’d give it all just to see her beyond my dreams
love was the martyr for man long ago
it separates the rust from my steel plated heart, this I know
if only she knew how much she means
if only she could see the life she brings
and the light she shines in this hope-ridden world of mine
I see her every time I sleep
she sings a song, a song so deep
just as deep as my wounds, oh how they bleed
my only hope, and only delight
is to see her tonight but not through my eyes
just sight doesn’t satisfy for I know I can see her in the day, but to truly see her I must delay until the hour at which the new day wakes
in that hour I shall see her but not by the breath of life
I shall see my goddess and her beauty, but not by the sense of sight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/20/2014 12:19:00 PM
I feel the yearning and ache in your words...beautiful write!
Login to Reply
Anderson Avatar
Meg Anderson
Date: 11/20/2014 10:00:00 PM
Your welcome. I have been enjoying your poems!
Frey Avatar
Jacob Frey
Date: 11/20/2014 9:53:00 PM
thank you very much meg
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad