God, You Are the One- My First Poem

God, you are the one 
with all the blessings and powers
my heart always tends to you
day, night, at all hours.


Nothing more, nothing less
want to remain the same,
just want your contentment
dont want any fame.


Mistakes from me in this life
haunt me every night,
but I know you are the one
every time who  makes me right.


Oh! my God, just
tell me to die
I wont waste a sec 
to come to you through sky.


Father, mother, siter, brother
everyone will cry, 
but I will, though it hurts,
tell them good bye.


Love you God, damn to much
love all your creations
no other person deserves but you
please accept all my devotions.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Agustin Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 9:25 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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September 7, 2016 at 1:45 PM
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Aju Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 11:40 AM
explains a lot
Aju Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 11:39 AM
explains a lot
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