CayCay Godwin Poet Rhyme

God Tingle Touches Us

We are born aware of our soul’s treasure.
We know we are from spirit sourced designs
and graced with faith traits far beyond measure.
These truths grow loose when spirit earth aligns.

As earth life feeds us human emotions,
we drift from truth and our hearts refashion.
Days of human ways grow false held notions.
God nudges us to reclaim His passion.

When a child, God tingle-touches our skin.
We feel otherness seeking us aware
with love seeped passions that ignite within.
We cannot name it but thrill to its flair.

Time bends us to lend us a spirit mend
for it’s when pained that we seek beyond sight.
When we strive for a spiritual blend,
it is in quiet we find truth’s bright might.

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Ron VanHooser May 28, 2025 at 7:28 PM This is exceptional CayCay! Thank you for suggesting it, and yes, I can relate to every line, every thought, every experience. Well written, outstanding poem! CayCay Godwin May 29, 2025 at 1:11 PM Your enthusiasm has become my own and it feels so good, so good that words are blocked and I can't find any. I hope you can feel the 'thank you' in what I've written. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Joanna Daniel March 12, 2025 at 11:11 PM This is so wonderful, CayCay, enjoyed reading you:) and yes, I used to go by Jo, though my full name is Joanna, had some copyright issues in some contests I won, so started using my full name:)

Gershon Wolf February 20, 2025 at 6:37 PM Love the phrase -- tingle-touch-- and the concept, CayCay. We CAN stay alert to that touch, but it's hard as we 'grow' -- i.e., stray from God. Interesting ink, gw

Daniel Henry Rodgers February 11, 2025 at 4:37 AM Dear CayCay, Your word radiates divine grace, capturing the ebb and flow of faith throughout life’s journey. I love the imagery of God’s touch as a "tingle" evokes a tender, personal connection. A beautifully reflective and heartfelt piece! To God be The Glory! Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh February 10, 2025 at 9:24 PM True spirituality fades as we become more immersed in earthly life but pain and hardship lead us to seek spiritual growth.A true nature of humane beings.So nicely penned

Paige Hind February 10, 2025 at 7:49 PM Breathtaking - what inspiration! I enjoyed every part of this "God nudges us to reclaim His passion. When a child, God tingle-touches our skin." <3