Kash Poet Poet Haiku

God the Scientist

the human being
a miracle of science
god the scientist

to be man or ape
it is our conscience only
progress or regress





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Placement:1st ; (August 2011)

Contest:Natural and Beyond!!

Sponsor:John Freeman

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Audrey Haick August 31, 2011 at 3:54 PM Congratulations on your well-deserved win in John's contest, Kashinath! Thanks for the comments. Love, Annalise

Poet Destroyer A August 29, 2011 at 11:12 PM ooooo! I so love this,..p.d.

Gwendolen Song August 29, 2011 at 8:33 PM Hey Kash! This is a Yowwwwwza Yowwwwwza win, friend. God the creator is the inventor of all science! The 5th line is your slam dunk....! I believe this haiku-senryu says more each time I read it! Keep the gel rollin! Gwendolen

Dr.Ram Mehta August 29, 2011 at 5:52 PM Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of John, kashinath

Sara Kendrick August 29, 2011 at 5:21 PM Congrats on your win with this creative way of presenting your idea..Sara

Caryl Muzzey August 29, 2011 at 4:02 PM Congratulations Kashinath on your first place win with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

Carolyn Devonshire August 29, 2011 at 2:50 PM Big congrats on your super win, Kash. Awesome poem..."progress or regress" is reallly a standout! Love, Carolyn

David Williams August 29, 2011 at 1:22 PM hey kash congrats on your first place win, David

Carol Sunshine Brown August 29, 2011 at 7:29 AM Congratulations on your well deserved placement in John Moses Freeman's "Natural and Beyond" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol

Lee Ramage August 28, 2011 at 11:47 PM Good take on this, I am amazed what people have read into this photo. Congratulations and well done. Lee

Joyce Johnson August 28, 2011 at 11:25 PM Congratulations on your top award. Well done.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 28, 2011 at 11:19 PM Congrats Kashinath on first place luv.. knew this one was top notch my friend.. super one..

S.Jagathsimhan Nair August 28, 2011 at 10:05 PM congrats on the win, jag

John Freeman August 28, 2011 at 9:08 PM A beautiful way to approach an answer to the them of the contest Kashinath. Love the last line finish. Congratulations on your worthy first place. Agape, Moses

Carrie Richards August 28, 2011 at 8:51 PM In the conscience!! Indeed it is!! :) Congratulations Kashinath!!!

Nancy Jones August 28, 2011 at 8:38 PM Conscience only... what consciousness! Congrats, kash!

Harry Horsman August 27, 2011 at 5:33 PM Hi Kashinath, lovely to read you again, wow that second phase one is sheer brilliance, good luck with these. Harry

Andrea Dietrich August 26, 2011 at 12:44 PM Hey, Kash, still waiting for a new poem from you. I"m off to see a movie now. I had a big disappointment this morning. I think I included you on the email I sent my friends regarding it. So I'm off to drown my sorrows in a movie. Thanks for your comments. Luv, Andrea

Chiquitachiamaka Baity August 25, 2011 at 8:29 PM Amazing write Kashinath....best of luck in the contest!!!!!!!!!!

Phyllis Babcock August 25, 2011 at 7:38 PM Great one for John's contest. Made me laugh because some people can be like apes ha ha and brilliantly done God the scientist-love this . Phyl

Nette Onclaud August 25, 2011 at 6:23 PM yoohoo, kashi.. where are you>:) huggs!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 23, 2011 at 10:06 PM amazing just amazing Kash.. great philosophy with truth and wisdom.. good luck in the contest.. a winner for sure my friend..luv..

Judy Ball August 23, 2011 at 5:04 PM Boy I hear you talkin' there my friend. Some people are no better than a bunch of monkeys the way they act. Only thing is people are more dangerous. God Bless, \JB

Nette Onclaud August 23, 2011 at 11:49 AM KASHI.. check my new blog!.. thanks..:) huggs

Fabiyas M V August 23, 2011 at 10:56 AM Thanks a lot,Kasi.Nice thoughts well packed......FABIYAS.......

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