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God Take Control

MY head 
My heart
The end to my start
Love hurts
It kills
the despair it fills
My body 
My soul
God take control!

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James Peranteau

July 28, 2010 at 7:27 AM

This is a touching poem Ashley ! And you have the wisdom to know who is in control of yourself ! Have a great and inspiring day dear poet ! james

Ashley Grant

July 26, 2010 at 4:43 PM

Thank you very much. Yes you are right people do make choices not love.Life is what you make of it and what God wills of it. God Bless

Kevin Pace

July 24, 2010 at 12:20 PM

you are certainly on the right track. God can heal all hurts. Love, or the lack theredof, can certainly be painful... but people make choices, love doesn't. So, my prAyer for you is Love (a beautiful love witgh God at the center. Kevin

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